Recent Comments

4/17/25, 9:09 AM
Looking great so far. I think the slow progress is a very good idea, transformations that are too fast leave little space to immerse the reader in the change. The small changes give you lots of space to ramp up slowly. I always like a bit of tension in stories - that is, that there is some uncertainty of outcome. When its an all powerful force with no way to fail, that's not as interesting as something that might fail, can be resisted, and you read on to see if it will succeed. Big fan of strong lads who might normally be able to escape their fate being taken advantage of because they're asleep, stories of picking people off one by one undetected, and friends corrupting friends too. But that's just me, you should write what you love mate.
Feb 4, 2025
4/17/25, 4:44 AM
Keep coming back to this one. Really hope you’ll continue it!

4/17/25, 8:28 AM
@[texas95](/user/show/10020267) Thanks! I had some ideas to continue it with Rob and new couples with each story (or maybe someone by themself) but I've got so many ideas and only so much time. This year I'm going to make more of an effort to write more and try and monetize it so I have an excuse to spend more time writing and work on some of the longer story ideas I have
Leo
4/17/25, 7:21 AM
Please continue this story! I absolutely love it!
4/17/25, 3:58 AM
Sounds like a nice house.
4/17/25, 3:15 AM
We need to know what's in that oil! Great story to a classic theme. You pulled all the stops.
Feb 11, 2025
akamok
4/16/25, 6:08 PM
love it !!!!so hot!!!

4/17/25, 2:41 AM
@akamok Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
4/17/25, 1:40 AM
More, please!

4/17/25, 1:56 AM
@[blankbot](/user/show/1247965) Thanks. There will be more :)
4/16/25, 3:28 PM
Great Start will look forward to the next chapter

4/17/25, 1:54 AM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Thanks :)
Anonymous
4/17/25, 1:07 AM
Hoping for more chapter
4/16/25, 11:09 PM
This story is very Painful to me. I grew up getting beat up by Bullies everyday. Parents, Teachers, and even family were bullying me. I took up Mixed Martial Arts and was willing to bleed than not fight back. To this day I still have so much Rage. I beg you all, to PLEASE stay safe. There is a way out from the Abuse and Pain. You have the Right to a Life free from hurt and Abuse.