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Zai
11/9/22, 9:12 PM
Thank Goodness... no poo or pee! To each their own, but still... ... ... human waste in our neck of the World's woods belongs down the pipes or an outhouse, etc... πŸš«πŸ’©πŸ’§πŸš« loud LOL!!! Writing about Worlds, I am enjoying your World building, or better stated, World rebuilding, in the realm of Luthor. Everyone in the story overall is having their lives rebuilt/altered in some way or another. Even Lex, the tyrannical leader/master is experiencing change within himself. And with Python challenging him at a crucial stage of so much bitching occurring? Superman, Jimmy, BJ-El, and hopefully Batman? The bald stud himself could eventually become a bitched bitch, lol, himself if he doesn't watch his ass... and attitude. Well, I must go. Take care and have a most excellent day, SuperDude! πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ’£πŸ’£πŸ’£πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

Zai
11/10/22, 3:52 AM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) I forgot to add, that your concern for what we readers will like is admirable and thoughtful. I truly appreciate the sentiment. However, as I've written before, this IS YOUR STORY! It's cool you enjoy our suggestions and implement some, but go with your gut. You have the skill set (mind, writing & heart) to craft kinky kink with a great plot. So do as you've been doing... gifting us with primo smut and an actual story beyond that! Adios, amigo SuperDude! πŸ’»πŸ–¨πŸ–²πŸ–¨βœ’πŸ˜‰
11/10/22, 3:46 AM
Love it!
11/9/22, 7:57 PM
Every time I read this I'm jealous of Mike. Brilliantly written with so much going on.

11/10/22, 2:46 AM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) Poor boy does have quite the evening, doesn't he?
11/9/22, 7:49 PM
So the plot thickens lol, even though I want a happy ending for prince kamay reading this chapter I kind of was like well he seems happy where he is lol. Can’t wait to read next chapter , great job Goon Noob x

11/10/22, 1:20 AM
@[Bimarguy](/user/show/10006035) When writing this chapter I felt I needed to let readers know that there was light at the end of the tunnel for Kamay, but he's not out of trouble just yet.
11/9/22, 10:12 PM
The old chief!! Ooh my god I can't believe he still lives lmao. So is this just where all past chiefs retire when they decide to? Or just these two? And does Booker know about this? Bc if he does....

11/10/22, 1:17 AM
@[Zi19](/user/show/922060) Typically, the Chiefs when they retire go off on their own into solitude, accompanied only by their favored Qayllar. This just happens to be unique circumstances. As to if Booker knows about this, I'd wager he would've been thrown off by the Wiraqocha's language when it comes to a Chief being 'gone'.
Anonymous
11/10/22, 12:12 AM
Wow!! Sooooo hot!! Please please please continue this!
Private
11/9/22, 11:58 PM
This really needs to be an animation
Gingcub
11/9/22, 10:15 PM
So fucking hot! Whenever I see you’ve published a new story I know I’m gonna be gooning all day. Couldn’t make it half way through without cumming, so I had to keep coming back and jerking again :) And the piss slave part was my favorite yet

11/9/22, 11:39 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) The highest praise a smut writer like myself can get is that it takes several loads to make it through the chapter lol. Piss slaves aren't to everyone's tastes but hopefully several guys might open up to further degradation and usefulness to their alphas

Gingcub
11/9/22, 11:48 PM
@[GoonNoob](/user/show/10004535) I hope so too 😈
11/9/22, 10:11 PM
So fucking hot πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯! Can't wait for more chapters.
11/9/22, 8:37 PM
I love this story so much!!! :zany_face: :hot_face: