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Zai
11/8/22, 2:52 PM
Dude! Whoa! Smutty Heat delivered! I love Jimmy’s cock being the official first human - homo erectus- to plow his once bestie. And yes, that was my attempt at pun-ny humour, lol; homo erectus. Yes, the young lad had all the advantages against the once mighty superhero, but I didn’t read no complaints from the Man of Squeals, did I. No that cunted bitch was euphoric to be taken by Jimmy’s boi-cock. What a fucking whore Clark has be-cum, huh!?!? Adding in Jimmy's sexy wrestling singlet and SupaPussi's pink, specially embroidered panties, we were left wanting more wanton action. Congrats on another steamy chapter! Long live SupaSlut becoming more sub and cock/cum crazed like the greedy little piggy we're cumming to 💓!!! Ciao!

11/8/22, 3:34 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) THANK YOU, ZAI!!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Appreciate the LOVE for this chapter-- it's one of my FAVES (& means the world that you "picked up" on my PASSION)!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Glad you took note of the respective wrestling gear, i.e., Jimmy's red-hot slinglet & Supes' bitched-out pink embroidered panties!!:hugs: I really enjoyed unpacking the intricasies of Jimmy's feelings of anger & betrayal (& hero worship) against Superman, which were only magnified by his "roid rage"-- having him "turn on his hero" so violently & in SUCH a dominating fashion was an uber-THRILL for me!!:muscle: Again, SUPER GR8FUL 4 the positive comments & continued ENJOYMENT of the storyline-- YOU ROCK, SIR!!:innocent:
Anonymous
11/8/22, 3:27 PM
I really hope Luke and Sammy get together! I love the sex aspect but I really liked the romance Sammy has!
ann
11/8/22, 2:51 PM
I want more chapters, specifically when they get impregnated by their father
Zai
11/7/22, 2:41 PM
Dude! Dude!! DUDE!!! These last four chapters were SO KINKY, SO NASTY, and SO SURFACE OF THE SUN H🌞T! You wrote some nice prep work for SuperBitch! Then you added in bringing Bizzaro Jon-El for the auction; but the big clincher was Connor, aka Superboy showing up to volunteer to be another slave-boi trophy for the highest bidder! Superboy, or now known as Superboi-toi, is a clone comprised of Lex' & Superman's DNA. So does that illustrate that the cloned 🍎 apple didn't fall far from his genetic providers trees? As in Lex is pretty much a gay stud and apparently Superman has those, ummm, tendencies within himself, too! So it makes sense Conner craves cock as a bottom slut whore as well. I wonder if Dick gets to dick Conner's virgin boi-pussy or is Superboi-toi a pro already at sucking and getting plowed? And, I'm wondering if Bruce checks his wards finances, won't he wonder the how's & why's of where $1 million bucks went to? That could be a second valid reason Batman goes to investigate Lex and LuthorCorp. Along with trying to find his friend and fellow hero, Superman. Ooohhhhh, I hope you have Lex being the main one to train Bruce Wayne/Batman in the ways of queer slave training. I bet Bruce harbours a secret lust for Lex. Always noticing Luthor's handsome face, glorious musculature and magnificent bulge... and tight, round muscled ass! *shaking my overly vivid & horny I imagination... ... ... whew 😛😜* Now back to these awesome chapters, lol. I love Jimmy having such wanton lust and lascivious needs for cock, now. The young photographer now has images of cocks in his mind instead of capturing the next amazing shot of Superman bering a hero. That boi is now a goner for big boners, huh? Lex!? What a horndog for eating and drilling boi-cunt with his big ol' Daddy tongue. Keep on munching Lex, keep on munching. But, my fave part in these last 4 chapters is the 2 on 1 and 2 in 1 *filthy lol* action with Phython & Rico utterly decimating a very, very willing and wanton Man of Steel... or now known as *drum roll 🥁*, the Man OF Squeal!!! Yes, I'd venture a guess that soon enough, there'll be absolutely no need of any drugs, gas, or forms of Kryptonite to control or aid in SupaFags conversion. Reading about how blissfully bitched out the superhero is now! Taking cocks like the hungry whore he's become? Spit-roasted with glee! Becoming a double-stuffed Kryptonian Oreo? Yelling out his complete submission as he's realizing that he was meant to service Lex? Service Python? Service Jimmy? Service Rico? Service COCK! Oh, yes! Superman is definitely falling down that rabbit hole faster and faster; into the Wonderlad of Bitchdom!!! Thanks for 4 more awesome chapters! Wet Dreams, Ahoy, lol, lol, lol! 😜😛🌞🥁🍎😉😍

11/7/22, 4:54 PM
@Zai Ciao ZAI!! I cannot express enough GRATITUDE for your "squealing endorsement" of these last 4 chapters!!! Really enjoyed your praise, various recap/synopses & of course, your multiple suggestions, which BTW, I hope U notice the introduction of the BAT (& some of the specific clothing & gear references in the last few chapters (esp. Chs. 13-14!)!!! I sometimes wonder if a couple of these chapters "get lost" (so to speak) OR "fall through the cracks" from some of the readers, when multiple chapters get posted ...as the Jimmy Olsen vs. Supabitch (Ch. 8) got "glossed over" by many, and (imho) I thoroughly enjoyed writing that chapter as Jimmy "roidfully" beats down the Supacunt with not only wrestling skills, but then his dominant (& masterful!) fucking of the Supawhore's asshole! THRILLED that you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline & I hope to continue to do so!! Have a GR8 Week, Kind Sir!:smiling_imp:

Zai
11/8/22, 5:35 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) OMG! Fuck me gently with a chainsaw! *contrite lol* And hand me a V-8 veggie juice! ASAP! I plum forgot to mention the Jimmy/Supes wrestling match. I was so excited by the orgy and SuperHomo getting split open by Python & Rico, that my commenting train of thought derailed a bit. Sorry, Dude! So, here's my thoughts on Jimmy dominating Superman... yum, hot, kinky, extraordinary, superb... are just some simple adjectives but I'll add more details. I love Jimmy's cock being the official first human - homo erectus- to plow his once bestie. And yes, that was my attempt at pun-ny humour, lol; homo erectus. Yes, the young lad had all the advantages against the once mighty superhero, but I didn't read no complaints from the Man of Squeals, did I. No that cunted bitch was euphoric to be taken by Jimmy's boi-cock. What a fucking whore Clark has be-cum, huh!?!? As for frequency of publishing chapters? That's up to you, Dude. I don't blame you for worrying that certain facts and nuances may go unnoticed. I try to comment on each chapter when I can, but four chapters in a row was too tempting and attention grabbing to stop and comment each chapter. My excuse was I was on a short trip and didn't have access to any internet for much of that period (we were mountain biking & camping Big Sur). However, if you wanted to, publish a new chapter every two days. That way there still a nice frequency yet keeps our breath bated for what comes & who cums next! *absolutely filthy lol and eyewink* Looking forward to reading about Batman finally entering the story. I also hope Lex can turn Nightwing, aka Dick Grayson into one of his growing numbers of superhero harem bitches. Ciao!

11/8/22, 2:36 PM
@Zai Cheers ZAI!! You make my day with your comments-- LOVE your "opening lines"...they are CLASSIC!!! If I may please ask you to "do me one solid"...could you possibly please cut & paste your respective comments about the Jimmy vs. Superbitch wrestling match & post it under the Chapter 8 comments, so other prospective readers might be drawn to it....as it is PERSONALLY, one of my FAVE chapters in this AU!!! THANK YOU in advance 4 doing this (& of course, WHEN you have the time!!)!! Thanks also for your reply/advice & thoughts about the releasing of chapters...I will take your suggestions accordingly -- I did wonder where you were over the weekend (when I didn't hear from you/see any comments from you), but I hope that you thoroughly ENJOYED Big Sur-- I lived in the L.A. area some years back, but my career pursuits prevented me from ever making it up there...(but maybe someday)!! There's more to CUM (& certainly more to unravel!), so I'm happy that you're diggin on the direction(s)-- I'm ALWAYS GRATEFUL 4 your input/suggestions!! Have an AWESOME day!:innocent:
Anonymous
7/19/18, 3:14 PM
Hey, I know this is an old story and you probably won't see this. I thought I'd try anyway... I like how this story went... however I hates Karl's father by this and his family... I was wondering if you'd consider chapter 3 where Karl's identity is revealed, hes freed and he gets revenge on everyone including his own family

11/8/22, 11:32 AM
Well, it's Karl's fault to place his trust on his father anyway. That scum shouldn't be trusted. Besides, he and Trevor will become twins soon, there is no telling if the one that get freed would be him, it can be Trevor using Karl's identity.
Jul 23, 2019
11/8/22, 10:08 AM
Despite their talk as if they're righterous, both that Lutz and Ahmed are shitfuck. They made it as if it's Robin's fault and he must take the suitable purnishment, however they never intent to let him go in the first place. All lies. They think he cannot escape from their grip? Jokes on them. They can wake up one morning with their throats slitted. Done. The police would never find out about the culprit because Robin is death and Tom doesn't exist, and Lutz is the one that has ensured of that to masked his own shit.
Nov 5, 2022
11/7/22, 3:04 PM
As a far left leaning person, Malskin, your stories always turn me on. I always look forward to reading more of them.

11/8/22, 7:32 AM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) Come and get repurposed and will cure you of your pesky left leanings :rofl:
11/8/22, 7:27 AM
The end is a little meaner than I'd like (gets unbearably horny, but never any pleasure from it? Guy really covered all the bases!) but still really hot.
11/8/22, 6:40 AM
Hot story! I do love a fat assed twink learning his place.
11/8/22, 4:00 AM
Not sure how I missed this before. It's fantastic. Will read as many as you post Hahaha