This was really hot and sexy! I would love to see more sequels either seeing more humilation of other people... or really a happier ending for this couple too.... But it's really hot.

Love what you did with Batman. I could just picture him in is new uniform. Oh that ending. What will Python do when he finds out his super slut was telling him the truth? I guess we will just have to wait and see what will happen in the next chapter.

It was a fantastic read from start to finish. No time did it lag or fail to inspire a sense of eroticism. Hot. Probably one of the best reads I have had for a long time.

My big question, Dude, is why is Bruce|Batman so friendly and cool with Lex? And the same for Dr. Strange? I realize this is an AU, but since you already had canon feels Superman v. Lex Luthor in the beginning of the story, I'd assume that Wayne and Strange would have suspicions towards Lex. Hmmmmmmm... ??? However, Bruce & Lex act like besties and Hugo being all into hypnotising and bringing down Superman (and even Batman) seemed a bit out of left field. I'm not criticising you nor this chapter. It just perplexed me in its content. Please don't hate me. 🤔 As you know, I was hoping more of the canon, ever alert and suspicious Caped Crusader arriving and beginning to put his detective skills to use. Then alas, the Dark Knight's investigating soon would bring him to becoming a bitched dick-tective, lol. Above all, though, this is your story, your plot, your visions. And I don't want to throw shade or aspersions on it. So I'm going to now comment on what occurred in this chapter. Lex is one sly fox, huh? Bringing in a big gun like Bruce Wayne|Batman to mentally root and cement Superman's recently submissive & cunted psyche. And it's such a delight that the cunted psyche has a direct link to Clark|Superman's whorish and slutty oral and anal holes. It's going to be interesting to read the dialog you write that's going to occur between Bruce & Clark. Plus, will Bruce be Bruce Wayne or Batman & will Superman be in some slutty attire or his superhero costume, etc? Will Bruce|Batman be converted to ultimately top or bottom? I'm voting an utter bottom bitch, lol. That way Lex has SupaSlut & BatBitch under his total control. Imagine what you wrote earlier about Lex wanting to whore out the Big Blue Boy scout. The huge amounts of $ bank$ that'll bring in. The same would be true about whoring out Batman. Joker, Riddler, Penguin, Killer Croc, Solomon Grundy, Deathstroke, etc, etc, etc, would pay msny millions to own Batsy for a night. Again, please don't take my opening thoughts as negative feelings. I express my thoughts, yes, but I don't ever want to hurt feelings. You have a very vivid and keen imagination which you're able to translate quite well into creative writing. Thanks and high-gives, Dude! 🤔😋😎😊😉🤗👅

Hola, Amigo! No probs cutting and pasting. Yes, I love Big Sur! My parents have a beach house in Carmel, so we made many a pilgrimages to the pristine and raw beauty that is Big Sur; since I was a wee one. I hope you have a great day, too! Later, Gator! 😀😁

Dude! Whoa! Smutty Heat delivered! I love Jimmy’s cock being the official first human - homo erectus- to plow his once bestie. And yes, that was my attempt at pun-ny humour, lol; homo erectus. Yes, the young lad had all the advantages against the once mighty superhero, but I didn’t read no complaints from the Man of Squeals, did I. No that cunted bitch was euphoric to be taken by Jimmy’s boi-cock. What a fucking whore Clark has be-cum, huh!?!? Adding in Jimmy's sexy wrestling singlet and SupaPussi's pink, specially embroidered panties, we were left wanting more wanton action. Congrats on another steamy chapter! Long live SupaSlut becoming more sub and cock/cum crazed like the greedy little piggy we're cumming to 💓!!! Ciao!

I really hope Luke and Sammy get together! I love the sex aspect but I really liked the romance Sammy has!

I want more chapters, specifically when they get impregnated by their father

Dude! Dude!! DUDE!!! These last four chapters were SO KINKY, SO NASTY, and SO SURFACE OF THE SUN H🌞T! You wrote some nice prep work for SuperBitch! Then you added in bringing Bizzaro Jon-El for the auction; but the big clincher was Connor, aka Superboy showing up to volunteer to be another slave-boi trophy for the highest bidder! Superboy, or now known as Superboi-toi, is a clone comprised of Lex' & Superman's DNA. So does that illustrate that the cloned 🍎 apple didn't fall far from his genetic providers trees? As in Lex is pretty much a gay stud and apparently Superman has those, ummm, tendencies within himself, too! So it makes sense Conner craves cock as a bottom slut whore as well. I wonder if Dick gets to dick Conner's virgin boi-pussy or is Superboi-toi a pro already at sucking and getting plowed? And, I'm wondering if Bruce checks his wards finances, won't he wonder the how's & why's of where $1 million bucks went to? That could be a second valid reason Batman goes to investigate Lex and LuthorCorp. Along with trying to find his friend and fellow hero, Superman. Ooohhhhh, I hope you have Lex being the main one to train Bruce Wayne/Batman in the ways of queer slave training. I bet Bruce harbours a secret lust for Lex. Always noticing Luthor's handsome face, glorious musculature and magnificent bulge... and tight, round muscled ass! *shaking my overly vivid & horny I imagination... ... ... whew 😛😜* Now back to these awesome chapters, lol. I love Jimmy having such wanton lust and lascivious needs for cock, now. The young photographer now has images of cocks in his mind instead of capturing the next amazing shot of Superman bering a hero. That boi is now a goner for big boners, huh? Lex!? What a horndog for eating and drilling boi-cunt with his big ol' Daddy tongue. Keep on munching Lex, keep on munching. But, my fave part in these last 4 chapters is the 2 on 1 and 2 in 1 *filthy lol* action with Phython & Rico utterly decimating a very, very willing and wanton Man of Steel... or now known as *drum roll 🥁*, the Man OF Squeal!!! Yes, I'd venture a guess that soon enough, there'll be absolutely no need of any drugs, gas, or forms of Kryptonite to control or aid in SupaFags conversion. Reading about how blissfully bitched out the superhero is now! Taking cocks like the hungry whore he's become? Spit-roasted with glee! Becoming a double-stuffed Kryptonian Oreo? Yelling out his complete submission as he's realizing that he was meant to service Lex? Service Python? Service Jimmy? Service Rico? Service COCK! Oh, yes! Superman is definitely falling down that rabbit hole faster and faster; into the Wonderlad of Bitchdom!!! Thanks for 4 more awesome chapters! Wet Dreams, Ahoy, lol, lol, lol! 😜😛🌞🥁🍎😉😍

Hey, I know this is an old story and you probably won't see this. I thought I'd try anyway... I like how this story went... however I hates Karl's father by this and his family... I was wondering if you'd consider chapter 3 where Karl's identity is revealed, hes freed and he gets revenge on everyone including his own family