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11/7/22, 2:12 AM
Brilliant work as always, man! I'm excited to see more and absolutely did not expect that twist at the end! Great job with the subtle worldbuilding, too!
11/7/22, 1:48 AM
That dick #2 is cut is just such a brilliant bit of detail for Wes to focus on. Many, I am _loving_ your character work in this series! And the second orgasm was _chef’s kiss_. Masterful stuff.
11/7/22, 1:32 AM
Um….continue? Why stop?
11/7/22, 12:53 AM
Great story, hope you continue !
11/6/22, 9:04 PM
Did we skip a chapter someplace? From what was posted we have Chapter 15, then the unnumbered one, followed by Chapter 18. Somewhere, it appears, we lost either chapter 16 or 17.

11/7/22, 12:38 AM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) Sorry, I messed up the number. This is chapter 17, let me fix it.

11/7/22, 12:38 AM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) Thanks for the heads up!
11/6/22, 11:19 PM
Oh, Neemie… so hot, so zany, so creative, so _funny_… what a gem of a story.
Nutiper
10/25/22, 11:14 PM
Holy shit. The eyes are the nipples of the face and mine are _very_ 👀 right now Excited for Maarkeilscaant tomorrow! Wahoo!

11/6/22, 11:19 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Hah! _Somebody_ watched their DRUK s3 snatch game…
11/6/22, 11:03 PM
My goodness, Neemie, but if you aren’t a master at conveying character and personality right from the get-go. This is an exciting start and I am _here_ for the next chapter!
11/6/22, 10:45 PM
I like it, I hope to see more of it soon
11/6/22, 10:30 PM
You definitely nailed the atmosphere, and the vibe of what experiencing sex is for Dawson now. Very intriguing. I feel like I could read an entire 3k-word chapter that’s just Dawson taking Reece and Brody through a single round of passion before starting it back up again. Nicely done!