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11/7/22, 12:53 AM
Great story, hope you continue !
11/6/22, 9:04 PM
Did we skip a chapter someplace? From what was posted we have Chapter 15, then the unnumbered one, followed by Chapter 18. Somewhere, it appears, we lost either chapter 16 or 17.

11/7/22, 12:38 AM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) Sorry, I messed up the number. This is chapter 17, let me fix it.

11/7/22, 12:38 AM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) Thanks for the heads up!
11/6/22, 11:19 PM
Oh, Neemie… so hot, so zany, so creative, so _funny_… what a gem of a story.
Nutiper
10/25/22, 11:14 PM
Holy shit. The eyes are the nipples of the face and mine are _very_ 👀 right now Excited for Maarkeilscaant tomorrow! Wahoo!

11/6/22, 11:19 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Hah! _Somebody_ watched their DRUK s3 snatch game…
11/6/22, 11:03 PM
My goodness, Neemie, but if you aren’t a master at conveying character and personality right from the get-go. This is an exciting start and I am _here_ for the next chapter!
11/6/22, 10:45 PM
I like it, I hope to see more of it soon
11/6/22, 10:30 PM
You definitely nailed the atmosphere, and the vibe of what experiencing sex is for Dawson now. Very intriguing. I feel like I could read an entire 3k-word chapter that’s just Dawson taking Reece and Brody through a single round of passion before starting it back up again. Nicely done!
Oct 11, 2020
11/6/22, 10:27 PM
Fuck me!! I love this story!
11/6/22, 10:02 PM
This seems like it has some fun worldbuilding and an interesting future story planned! Looking forward to more.
11/6/22, 3:51 PM
This is sexy and creepy and horrific all at the same time. The first set of transformations is really hot. Then when Mitchell gets absorbed, it’s… terrifying? Not that much but definitely twisted things and the tone. Very well-written. Feels like it could be easily made into a creepy erotic Tim Burton film, but Tim Burton from the time that he did Edward Scissorhands. Also I probably am thinking of that because of Vincent Price. Very well done!

11/6/22, 9:58 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Holy hell this is high praise! I mean really high praise. I was sitting here wondering if anyone was reading this because there were no comments. I was like welp maybe I didn't do such a great job or something. So this comment has me so filled with joy and really truly is the highest compliment and praise I think I have ever gotten.