Recent Comments

11/6/22, 3:51 PM
This is sexy and creepy and horrific all at the same time. The first set of transformations is really hot. Then when Mitchell gets absorbed, it’s… terrifying? Not that much but definitely twisted things and the tone. Very well-written. Feels like it could be easily made into a creepy erotic Tim Burton film, but Tim Burton from the time that he did Edward Scissorhands. Also I probably am thinking of that because of Vincent Price. Very well done!

11/6/22, 9:58 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Holy hell this is high praise! I mean really high praise. I was sitting here wondering if anyone was reading this because there were no comments. I was like welp maybe I didn't do such a great job or something. So this comment has me so filled with joy and really truly is the highest compliment and praise I think I have ever gotten.
11/6/22, 9:50 PM
Ooh, but if _this_ isn’t an interesting and atmospheric start. I will most definitely be getting to chapter 2 in short order…
11/6/22, 8:10 PM
So glad you're back! I was obediently waiting right here for more.
11/6/22, 7:04 PM
Woof. Love the suspense and would love to see Matt pull coach in... after a bit of a struggle ;)
11/6/22, 5:50 PM
I am loving this story. My only complaint is my cock and I can’t stop wanting more of Supfag being superfaggy lol.

11/6/22, 6:32 PM
@[Darby Thomas](/user/show/10017156) Hey Darby!! THANK YOU so much for your positive comments (& your continued ENJOYMENT of the storyline)!! THRILLED to hear that you (& your cock) keep wanting MORE....LOL!! I will do my UTMOST BEST to keep "the twists (& curveballs)" coming/CUMMING!! :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: ENJOY your Sunday, kind Sir!
11/6/22, 4:34 PM
Oh boy oh boy oh boy!
11/6/22, 7:52 AM
Clever and inventive as always, what i liked most is that slight hint of danger. What happened to the previous pack? Did they choose to leave or did something happen? Just how old is Alpha? A mystery with no answers. I also loved the idea of taking bits of different people, it's a literal display of what happens in every group, each new member changes the dynamic.

11/6/22, 4:08 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) There are answers to these questions, but they will have to be addressed in a sequel at one point. And I'm glad you liked it. :)
Noah
11/6/22, 3:50 PM
will there ever be a next part i really wanna know what happens 🥲
11/6/22, 3:36 PM
Another super hot chapter. Something about your writing style never fails to make me jerk off like Coach Cameron just did.
11/6/22, 1:15 PM
How do you manage to keep outdoing yourself. Amazing story.

11/6/22, 2:27 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Good Morning MJKUHL!!! THANK YOU 4 the kind compliment, Sir-- you've made my day!! Not quite sure how to answer your question/comment (which I take as the HIGHEST of compliments!)-- it's not a matter of "outdoing myself", really-- I do my BEST to ensure that the story continues to unfold with new/exciting elements.... but I appreciate your continued enjoyment of the storyline & I hope to keep you/the other readers engaged & satiated!! MUCH Gratitude & ENJOY Your Sunday!!!:innocent: