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11/5/22, 3:02 PM
How long til he gives in and starts tasting his jock pre cum 😈

peachy
11/5/22, 7:12 PM
@[Readytochange](/user/show/240124) We’ll have to see ;)
Lavender Lad
11/5/22, 1:20 PM
Its so refreshing to finally see hypno focused story on gay spiral stories! (ironic i know) especially as an ace guy who gets disappointed when alot of these hypnosis scenes are one or two paragraphs (or not even mentioned at all) and usually a build up into the sex scene where its all but forgotten about. I really love your writing style, its very immersing and makes one feel like they are experiencing every thing first hand with mike, and the way you described the inductions reminded me greatly of alot of these hypnosis shows i used to watch and helped me discover my interests(as was for many people i am sure) and gives them an edge of realism that makes them that much hotter. I greatly look forward to how this story develops and the undoubtedly sexy things that are going to happen to occur
11/5/22, 1:08 PM
I am so so "into" this story. Please post the next chapter! I love it.
10/30/22, 11:22 AM
I am really liking this story .i really want Kamay and the good guys to have a “happy ending “

11/5/22, 12:56 PM
@[Bimarguy](/user/show/10006035) Don't worry about that ;)
10/31/22, 12:09 AM
This chapter was just absolutely stuffed with plot and horny sex it was fantastic! I’m invested in Kamay and really hope he gets his due.

11/5/22, 12:56 PM
@[Max Lode](/user/show/338113) You'll have to read on and find out!
Jul 3, 2022
Anonymous
11/1/22, 5:32 PM
Out-fucking-standing Bator! This is a Penis Gooner’s dream bro! LOVED IT! Bate on brother

11/5/22, 12:55 PM
Thanks bro!
11/5/22, 9:18 AM
Mike is the co-star in this terrific chapter! Thanks for your superior writing skills and methodology in weaving a tale so hot...body heat and erotic wise! I hope Mike uses those new muscles to muscle his way into those two thong clad asses! Great chapter [how do you have time to write responses to comments and write erotica? I notice you respond with a lot of details. ]

11/5/22, 12:55 PM
@[tankonpoint](/user/show/697931) Mike was so interesting to write because he just appears as a reference at the beginning of Ch2 and then he just kinda exploded in my mind to write him into the story. I love when I'm writing and inspiration takes hold and a character or a plot that i hadn't planned for just ignites my imagination. As for comments, there's nothing worse than writing something and sending it out into the void and recieving no response, so I reply in order to keep readers coming back. Plus I genuinely love reading what people think, constructive criticism and guessing what's going to happen next!
11/5/22, 7:49 AM
Comments from new reader: I thought, when Zeus was sitting telling the thong boys to suck his dick so they earn his cock in their holes, that he was gonna treat them like his alpha-daddy sons. Since he realizes this is a gift from the perv gods, he could make his fantasies come to life. That would be hot for them to call Zeus, a muscled ebony dominant top, daddy. I have evil thoughts... Simply a play-time scenario for when they get together for workouts/sex; however this particular role-play does stop at the end of a session. This is an awesome story! At first you have us think the briefcase was just a random item whose ownership was extraneous. And now a package delivered stealthfully. Mystery Smut! 🤓 Btw, just started this story yesterday and seeing he date of the replies above, I'm catching up to hopefully partake in the Q&A. And now back to our [your] story...

11/5/22, 12:52 PM
@[tankonpoint](/user/show/697931) Glad to see you just discovering my first story on GSS! I always try to write interesting dom/sub relationships, with insight into how different people rationalize their feelings. I was particularly interested in seeing how the boys justify their hetero feelings despite being anal obsessed sluts. I always try to reply to most messages so please Q away :)
11/5/22, 6:39 AM
Loved this chapter, like how the hero had full intent to bring down the villain Dark Web but is captured and turned into a villain himself go Speed Trap enjoy the freedom to commit crime to quote Craig, dont call me that name I AM SpeedTrap now

11/5/22, 12:36 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Glad you liked it! :D
11/5/22, 12:22 PM
Another great chapter., would love to see Superman forced to perform his homosexual song and dance for the people of metropolis and have them turn on their defeated, degraded, saviour. Would really had to the humiliation of the cock crazy faggot supaslut boi. But I trust whatever else you have in store would be amazing.