Recent Comments

KJ
4/15/25, 11:23 AM
Really good story. Read it again hoping maybe for more chapters.
4/15/25, 6:51 AM
Oh man. Oh man. Oh man!
4/15/25, 5:02 AM
You continue to be one of my favorite authors on here. well done!
4/15/25, 3:55 AM
Yay!!! So happy this has been continued!!!
4/15/25, 3:18 AM
This is great!
4/15/25, 1:19 AM
Ok, wanna be a BEAR!!! 💪🐻❤️
4/14/25, 4:49 PM
Simon's personhood not being undermined (well, to a certain degree lol) is such a wonderful and refreshing take to this type of plot. I really appreciate the restraint of the mc, it's something that other stories tend to not have and its presence here makes it all the more hot due to the slow build up it provides. I hope you write more of these, be it a direct sequel or an entirely different one!

4/14/25, 8:32 PM
@[zorist](/user/show/10009719) Thank you! I’m definitely exploring some ideas for a part 2, but might be a while… I have some other unique ideas that could come sooner: one that is a little voodoo-doll esque with a twist, one slightly more realistic weed-induced lust (based on a true story that ALMOST happened to me!), and another with an ameteur musician that will probably be mind control or time stop of some sort. Lmk what you’d want to see first?

4/15/25, 12:34 AM
@[Trancinator 5000](/user/show/10061213) Oooh all of them seem interesting but you mentioning a twist makes me all the more curious about the voodoo themed one.
4/14/25, 10:10 PM
Wow, wow, wow! A great chapter! I can't wait to see how this wraps up! Tom was an Alpha, once upon a time? I wonder how he managed to step down, it seems like Alpha status is permanent, unless some cataclysmic like a territory is completely lost or desecrated by rivals. Mullins is back in the pack? I'm curious to see how that ends... Larry has put two and two together about Nando, but it seems like that confrontation will wait until the gym is reconquered. What will the fallout be of that, I wonder? Also, how the *fuck* does our werewolf hunter know Toddson's name? Sounds like he deliberately tipped this guy off so that he could manufacture a crisis he could rope Alpha Ruiz into handling. Paul the werebear sounds like an absolute dreamboat! Where do I sign up for my bite? There's still the question of what the final vision of the pack running in a field of flowers symbolizes. Are they forced to surrender themselves to the permanent moonlight of the National Park, and find peace and unity only in the surrender of their humanity? It would be a rather bittersweet ending, but oddly fitting...
4/14/25, 9:11 PM
I loved this so so much! Keep writing! This type of story is amazing!

Zac
4/14/25, 9:49 PM
Thanks @[Bostonhypno](/user/show/1081814)!
4/14/25, 9:48 PM
Excited to see where this goes! Very cool start