Recent Comments

11/2/22, 1:31 PM
Hey ZAI....You JUST made my day--THANKS a MILLION for your positive comments (& suggestions)!! YES, I do plan to bring Batman into the storyline, as well as some of the Titans (as I'm primed UP 4 the Season 4 tomorrow)!!! I appreciate ALL of your thoughts/suggestions/insights & will do my BEST to incorporate some of them into the upcoming storyline-- in fact, as I read your comments, it's provided me an inspirational brainstorm to pivot from a forthcoming scene which could introduce the Caped Crusader, although my focus will still be DEFINITELY concentrating on the ongoing degradation, subjugation & humilation of the Supabitch-- but THANK YOU, Sir-- I'm humbled-- Have an AWESOME day!!:innocent:

Zai
11/3/22, 4:50 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) You deserve positive praise and thanks for creating, writing & sharing this wonderful AU! Yay! Batman will eventually make an appearance and hopefully become part of Luthor's Lascivious Superhero Harem! Where nothing but muscled pretty boi studly men are always at the ready to service their Master's multitude of carnal needs! I'm excited to read who officially will be popping Superman's virgin Suppa-ass-pussy! Will it be Python, wearing a reptile print Speedo as he plows that Super-cunt? Jimmy, shoving his newly enlarged, angry red cock-rocket up his one-time pals twat? Or his true Master? His only real Master? Lex Luthor! The hottest bald hunk ever? With his humongous cock of death? Ramming and pulverizing the supremely tight, virgin Superman-honey-hole as he has the Kryptonian in a white jockstrap while he's wearing a scarlet, sheer Speedo?! Can you tell I've got a ripe and vivid clothing fetish/kink!?!? Ciao!
11/2/22, 10:25 AM
A solid ending to a wonderfully inventive story. The world needs more sluts :triumph:

11/3/22, 3:16 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) And I only do this for the world! More sluts for everyone. Thank you, Norismo!
Nov 2, 2022
11/3/22, 2:43 AM
Amazing story, would love a continuation.
11/3/22, 2:18 AM
Very sexy. I had actually been thinking about writing something with drones used as escorts but I've got too many ideas to get around to doing it. I very much enjoyed your take on it.
Nov 2, 2022
Nutiper
11/3/22, 1:34 AM
Oooh... I'm glad I clicked here based on the comments! This is really good as a stand-alone, but also has me so intrigued and curious to read more of the story for what happens next! The way you describe Mark's headspace and POV is really effective. I'm wondering if the summary could be catchier, to draw in more readers? (I almost didn't click on the story, unfortunately, because the summary made me think it might not be my jam!) I've been trying to think of what a 'catchier' summary might look like, hm... I dunno, maybe something like... > Mark's eager to lose his virginity, and when he meets a handsome stranger at a party, he's excited to go home with him. Though, if only Mark didn't keep getting these weird headaches around the stranger... and the urge to OBEY... Or, not necessarily that exact summary, but something in that vague shape? You can definitely leave it as is, though! I know I tend to overthink summaries... I just like your story!

11/3/22, 2:12 AM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Thank you. I am going to use that as my summary. It is a little more catchy!
11/3/22, 1:29 AM
Recently met a cigar-smoking leatherman. In addition to some very hot muscle/leather play, he's teaching me how to smoke cigars so I can smoke with him when we play, etc. I've read some other stories where muscle growth, body hair/beard, etc is triggered by cigar smoke. This is a lot more detailed and a very sexy pace. My cock is really enjoying it and I really like that my cock is getting programmed to get hard when I think about/see/smell/taste a cigar.
11/3/22, 12:54 AM
Hey Darby!! Glad you're enjoying the successive chapters & ongoing storyline!! Also, pleased you're saving this chapter for bedtime-- Hope that you thoroughly ENJOY it!! BTW...I can ASSURE you that this is NOT the end....I already several chapters "waiting in the wings"... I'm just doing "some fine tuning" before I publish them!! Sleep well, my friend!!:innocent:
11/3/22, 12:29 AM
Love how vivid your descriptions are. This is a pretty perfect hypnosis story that is fully focused on the kink itself. Great job!
Nov 2, 2022
11/2/22, 11:32 PM
Hope there will be more.
11/2/22, 8:06 AM
Excellent story!

11/2/22, 10:30 PM
Thank you! @[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380)