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Nov 2, 2022
11/2/22, 11:32 PM
Hope there will be more.
11/2/22, 8:06 AM
Excellent story!

11/2/22, 10:30 PM
Thank you! @[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380)
Sebastián Apollo
11/1/22, 8:34 PM
Very well done! From the beginning hook to the effects taking place to the aftermath, everything kept my attention throughout. You even gave me a couple of interesting new names for me to look up - so extra points coming from a name nerd. Good work, and a very worthy contender!

11/2/22, 10:29 PM
Thank you so much! I’m really happy that you enjoyed the story: I was straight-up rushing to finish it since I decided to go for it like a week before the deadline, and reading it now there’s some parts that I definitely could have changed or shortened, but I’m overall very happy with and proud of it as my first ever explicit work, and I’m even happier that people can be entertained by it. (Also glad I was able to do something cool in the names part of things, haha.) @[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736)
11/2/22, 10:14 PM
One of the all time classics right here <3
11/2/22, 10:10 PM
This is great love the play between brothers :)
11/2/22, 8:41 PM
Saving this chapter for bed time but definitely hoping this isn’t the final chapter, .
11/2/22, 8:25 PM
Deam, got me raild for this one. But would be nice if Gabriel finds his way back to his old roommate. That would be something interesting to see what would happen between the two. In other words, well done and a very well-written story.
jonsan
11/2/22, 7:49 PM
Love the hint of chastity. Get that new chav in a polo and stick his collar up. Nothing is more scally than that.
11/2/22, 6:35 PM
Fantastic continuation of one of the very best stories on this site. Thank you!
Nov 2, 2022
11/2/22, 6:28 PM
Not me with my irl crush also named Peter lol Awesome story! Hope to see more of it