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11/3/22, 2:18 AM
Very sexy. I had actually been thinking about writing something with drones used as escorts but I've got too many ideas to get around to doing it. I very much enjoyed your take on it.
Nov 2, 2022
Nutiper
11/3/22, 1:34 AM
Oooh... I'm glad I clicked here based on the comments! This is really good as a stand-alone, but also has me so intrigued and curious to read more of the story for what happens next! The way you describe Mark's headspace and POV is really effective. I'm wondering if the summary could be catchier, to draw in more readers? (I almost didn't click on the story, unfortunately, because the summary made me think it might not be my jam!) I've been trying to think of what a 'catchier' summary might look like, hm... I dunno, maybe something like... > Mark's eager to lose his virginity, and when he meets a handsome stranger at a party, he's excited to go home with him. Though, if only Mark didn't keep getting these weird headaches around the stranger... and the urge to OBEY... Or, not necessarily that exact summary, but something in that vague shape? You can definitely leave it as is, though! I know I tend to overthink summaries... I just like your story!

11/3/22, 2:12 AM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Thank you. I am going to use that as my summary. It is a little more catchy!
11/3/22, 1:29 AM
Recently met a cigar-smoking leatherman. In addition to some very hot muscle/leather play, he's teaching me how to smoke cigars so I can smoke with him when we play, etc. I've read some other stories where muscle growth, body hair/beard, etc is triggered by cigar smoke. This is a lot more detailed and a very sexy pace. My cock is really enjoying it and I really like that my cock is getting programmed to get hard when I think about/see/smell/taste a cigar.
11/3/22, 12:54 AM
Hey Darby!! Glad you're enjoying the successive chapters & ongoing storyline!! Also, pleased you're saving this chapter for bedtime-- Hope that you thoroughly ENJOY it!! BTW...I can ASSURE you that this is NOT the end....I already several chapters "waiting in the wings"... I'm just doing "some fine tuning" before I publish them!! Sleep well, my friend!!:innocent:
11/3/22, 12:29 AM
Love how vivid your descriptions are. This is a pretty perfect hypnosis story that is fully focused on the kink itself. Great job!
Nov 2, 2022
11/2/22, 11:32 PM
Hope there will be more.
11/2/22, 8:06 AM
Excellent story!

11/2/22, 10:30 PM
Thank you! @[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380)
Sebastián Apollo
11/1/22, 8:34 PM
Very well done! From the beginning hook to the effects taking place to the aftermath, everything kept my attention throughout. You even gave me a couple of interesting new names for me to look up - so extra points coming from a name nerd. Good work, and a very worthy contender!

11/2/22, 10:29 PM
Thank you so much! I’m really happy that you enjoyed the story: I was straight-up rushing to finish it since I decided to go for it like a week before the deadline, and reading it now there’s some parts that I definitely could have changed or shortened, but I’m overall very happy with and proud of it as my first ever explicit work, and I’m even happier that people can be entertained by it. (Also glad I was able to do something cool in the names part of things, haha.) @[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736)
11/2/22, 10:14 PM
One of the all time classics right here <3
11/2/22, 10:10 PM
This is great love the play between brothers :)