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11/2/22, 10:10 PM
This is great love the play between brothers :)
11/2/22, 8:41 PM
Saving this chapter for bed time but definitely hoping this isn’t the final chapter, .
11/2/22, 8:25 PM
Deam, got me raild for this one. But would be nice if Gabriel finds his way back to his old roommate. That would be something interesting to see what would happen between the two. In other words, well done and a very well-written story.
jonsan
11/2/22, 7:49 PM
Love the hint of chastity. Get that new chav in a polo and stick his collar up. Nothing is more scally than that.
11/2/22, 6:35 PM
Fantastic continuation of one of the very best stories on this site. Thank you!
Nov 2, 2022
11/2/22, 6:28 PM
Not me with my irl crush also named Peter lol Awesome story! Hope to see more of it
11/1/22, 12:51 AM
You did such a good job of worldbuilding and kicking this off with a wonderful, immersive atmosphere. The creation of the question game had such an element of fae creatures and fairytales, like Rumpelstiltskin and what have you. I’ll be honest and say that those fantastical, immersive elements came and went for me — I think they could have been carried through the action a little more thoroughly to elevate the sex scene beyond the already high level it reached. Regardless, this story is an accomplishment! You swung for the fences, and your love of the craft of writing shines through. Excellent work!

11/2/22, 5:51 PM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Yeah, I felt like the question game would really add to the mystique and I’m glad you liked it! I really wanted to get that immersive vibe and have that carry people through the story—it’s only that last sex scene that I didn’t have time to perfect or even spiritualise. But I appreciate you noticing my love for “the craft of writing”—I wanted to make this something that was really truly good _work_, and I think for the time I had I knit together something that let my skill shine through. Thanks for reading! And may the following chapters contain much more spiritual sex…
11/2/22, 4:33 PM
Thanks Mic. I’m not sure where you’re going on this but happy to chat with you and talk about it.
Anonymous
11/2/22, 4:31 PM
God, I would love another one of these stories. They're so hot!
11/2/22, 4:26 PM
nice opener! I hope you'll continue this, I'm very intrigued where this is exactly going. in the end, it's still the older brother that has got the dream dick, so how is this gonna play out? also, you can include the pictures in the story on here, too!