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11/2/22, 8:06 AM
Excellent story!

11/2/22, 10:30 PM
Thank you! @[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380)
Sebastián Apollo
11/1/22, 8:34 PM
Very well done! From the beginning hook to the effects taking place to the aftermath, everything kept my attention throughout. You even gave me a couple of interesting new names for me to look up - so extra points coming from a name nerd. Good work, and a very worthy contender!

11/2/22, 10:29 PM
Thank you so much! I’m really happy that you enjoyed the story: I was straight-up rushing to finish it since I decided to go for it like a week before the deadline, and reading it now there’s some parts that I definitely could have changed or shortened, but I’m overall very happy with and proud of it as my first ever explicit work, and I’m even happier that people can be entertained by it. (Also glad I was able to do something cool in the names part of things, haha.) @[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736)
11/2/22, 10:14 PM
One of the all time classics right here <3
11/2/22, 10:10 PM
This is great love the play between brothers :)
11/2/22, 8:41 PM
Saving this chapter for bed time but definitely hoping this isn’t the final chapter, .
11/2/22, 8:25 PM
Deam, got me raild for this one. But would be nice if Gabriel finds his way back to his old roommate. That would be something interesting to see what would happen between the two. In other words, well done and a very well-written story.
jonsan
11/2/22, 7:49 PM
Love the hint of chastity. Get that new chav in a polo and stick his collar up. Nothing is more scally than that.
11/2/22, 6:35 PM
Fantastic continuation of one of the very best stories on this site. Thank you!
Nov 2, 2022
11/2/22, 6:28 PM
Not me with my irl crush also named Peter lol Awesome story! Hope to see more of it
11/1/22, 12:51 AM
You did such a good job of worldbuilding and kicking this off with a wonderful, immersive atmosphere. The creation of the question game had such an element of fae creatures and fairytales, like Rumpelstiltskin and what have you. I’ll be honest and say that those fantastical, immersive elements came and went for me — I think they could have been carried through the action a little more thoroughly to elevate the sex scene beyond the already high level it reached. Regardless, this story is an accomplishment! You swung for the fences, and your love of the craft of writing shines through. Excellent work!

11/2/22, 5:51 PM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Yeah, I felt like the question game would really add to the mystique and I’m glad you liked it! I really wanted to get that immersive vibe and have that carry people through the story—it’s only that last sex scene that I didn’t have time to perfect or even spiritualise. But I appreciate you noticing my love for “the craft of writing”—I wanted to make this something that was really truly good _work_, and I think for the time I had I knit together something that let my skill shine through. Thanks for reading! And may the following chapters contain much more spiritual sex…