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10/31/22, 7:08 PM
Please write more. This was amazing. A bro wearing a chain always gets me.

11/1/22, 4:08 AM
@[Matt2628](/user/show/1395565) Thank you for this comment, I'm really glad you liked it! I don't know if there's more that I can write for this particular story, but I might write other stories down the line...
11/1/22, 3:26 AM
Faaaantastic lead up, but damn I wish Pa would have had more fun with him.
Evan
11/1/22, 12:09 AM
I love this story. As others have mentioned it's a nice, slow burn with clear indications that Holden is drawn in. His changes and his understanding of himself and his draw towards the book. That he decides he wants more rather than staying away but finding his own methods to ensure a more equitable exchange of power for his body is such a great addition to this story. It both makes it hotter and also speaks to the intelligence and resourcefulness of the book restorer. I'm intrigued by the old order that worked to contain Havoc over the centuries and Evermore having no doubt biting off more than he can chew here. His family may have worshipped this demon to get where they are in the past but I'm sure none of them tried to piss him off like this. Or brazenly attempt to subjugate him. Hubris. Havoc is going to have some fun if this continues and now that he and Holden are in a kind of symbiosis of servitude, I think Holden will enjoy whatever comeuppance Evermore has coming. The sex scenes were tactile and exciting and the lore behind the story is really engaging. So wonderfully done! Thank you for writing.

11/1/22, 3:04 AM
@[Evan](/user/show/133763) Thank you so much! I've definitely got plans for what you've mentioned and am hoping to release a second tale with these characters and this universe that brings in the Order and Evermore's plans for Havoc and Holden. 💖
11/1/22, 1:53 AM
You captured an ethereal quality so effectively - it really infused the entire thing, start to finish. A bit of a departure from the zanier stuff I usually associate you with, but a welcome one. It’s exciting to know you have this gear in you!

11/1/22, 2:23 AM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Thank you! I tend to want to write either moody occult stuff or slapstick romps (and the romps are usually more appropriate for smut). Halloween seemed a good a time as any to engage the other side of my creativity.
felix
11/1/22, 2:02 AM
This is definitely scratching a nice itch. Hot work!
Martin
10/31/22, 8:32 PM
Now that's a hot piece... I just want to read what thr rubber demon is doing with his new existance!

Anonymous
11/1/22, 1:47 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Maybe I’ll have to write something else up ;)
10/29/22, 7:30 PM
Yes please. More defeat and humiliation for Superman.

10/30/22, 12:33 AM
@[Darby Thomas](/user/show/10017156) Thanks, Darby!! Appreciate your comment & there's DEFINITELY more humiliation & subjugation on the way 4 Supes!! :innocent:

11/1/22, 1:41 AM
I love this story. Superman being a gay faggot has always been one of my favourite tropes. @[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379)
Lampshade15
11/1/22, 1:14 AM
Oh very interesting, can't wait for more. Hot start! Good idea and very well executed so far. I wonder what Dr Daddy will do to his boy next. The changing of Bradley's name to just Brad nearer the end was a nice touch.
11/1/22, 1:12 AM
Great set up. Can’t wait for the next chapter!