Recent Comments

Evan
11/1/22, 12:09 AM
I love this story. As others have mentioned it's a nice, slow burn with clear indications that Holden is drawn in. His changes and his understanding of himself and his draw towards the book. That he decides he wants more rather than staying away but finding his own methods to ensure a more equitable exchange of power for his body is such a great addition to this story. It both makes it hotter and also speaks to the intelligence and resourcefulness of the book restorer. I'm intrigued by the old order that worked to contain Havoc over the centuries and Evermore having no doubt biting off more than he can chew here. His family may have worshipped this demon to get where they are in the past but I'm sure none of them tried to piss him off like this. Or brazenly attempt to subjugate him. Hubris. Havoc is going to have some fun if this continues and now that he and Holden are in a kind of symbiosis of servitude, I think Holden will enjoy whatever comeuppance Evermore has coming. The sex scenes were tactile and exciting and the lore behind the story is really engaging. So wonderfully done! Thank you for writing.

11/1/22, 3:04 AM
@[Evan](/user/show/133763) Thank you so much! I've definitely got plans for what you've mentioned and am hoping to release a second tale with these characters and this universe that brings in the Order and Evermore's plans for Havoc and Holden. 💖
11/1/22, 1:53 AM
You captured an ethereal quality so effectively - it really infused the entire thing, start to finish. A bit of a departure from the zanier stuff I usually associate you with, but a welcome one. It’s exciting to know you have this gear in you!

11/1/22, 2:23 AM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Thank you! I tend to want to write either moody occult stuff or slapstick romps (and the romps are usually more appropriate for smut). Halloween seemed a good a time as any to engage the other side of my creativity.
felix
11/1/22, 2:02 AM
This is definitely scratching a nice itch. Hot work!
Martin
10/31/22, 8:32 PM
Now that's a hot piece... I just want to read what thr rubber demon is doing with his new existance!

Anonymous
11/1/22, 1:47 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Maybe I’ll have to write something else up ;)
10/29/22, 7:30 PM
Yes please. More defeat and humiliation for Superman.

10/30/22, 12:33 AM
@[Darby Thomas](/user/show/10017156) Thanks, Darby!! Appreciate your comment & there's DEFINITELY more humiliation & subjugation on the way 4 Supes!! :innocent:

11/1/22, 1:41 AM
I love this story. Superman being a gay faggot has always been one of my favourite tropes. @[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379)
Lampshade15
11/1/22, 1:14 AM
Oh very interesting, can't wait for more. Hot start! Good idea and very well executed so far. I wonder what Dr Daddy will do to his boy next. The changing of Bradley's name to just Brad nearer the end was a nice touch.
11/1/22, 1:12 AM
Great set up. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
10/31/22, 8:40 PM
I loved this story! Love to see Soren Fitz's hallmark belly inflation kink on full display. I loved the wah that you take up the theme of queerness tying into magic and otherness with such appreciation and care. I also loved the concept of the nympho sprites in particular. The repeated thread/idea of letting the magic/cock/cum/new experiences in and Aaron's openness made this a fantastically hot read. Thank you for this.

11/1/22, 1:06 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) One of the major ‘ohh’ moments when I was coming up with this sorry was the realisation that queer people might just be _better_ at magic, at least throughout history, because they pursued sexuality for mutual pleasure instead of a biological imperative like reproduction. It was an easy step after that to suggest that their past demonisation was in part due to their connection with magic and the threat that posed to power. The nymphomaniac spirits, I feel, breathed a life into their story that it needed especially in act 1–and I was thrilled when I came up with the idea for human-ghost double penetration. It just started naturally happening and I was like “fuck, this is perfect!” And, yeah, as much as I threatened an ominous spell, Aaron’s ‘falling’ is meant to be a really wholesome, exciting experience that has the same magic as, say, stumbling into Narnia. ‘Let him be Lucy’ was my homage to that classic fantasy trope. Thanks for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed.
11/1/22, 12:50 AM
Thank you for giving us a hot short guy. Short guys don’t get enough love in these stories
10/31/22, 9:16 PM
This pushed so many buttons for me. Love that he did all that to himself. Ethan needs more adventures

11/1/22, 12:22 AM
@[the brain exotic](/user/show/92123) glad you enjoyed! I hope Ethan’s other (mis)adventures work for you just as much :grin: