I loved this story! Love to see Soren Fitz's hallmark belly inflation kink on full display. I loved the wah that you take up the theme of queerness tying into magic and otherness with such appreciation and care. I also loved the concept of the nympho sprites in particular. The repeated thread/idea of letting the magic/cock/cum/new experiences in and Aaron's openness made this a fantastically hot read. Thank you for this.

Thank you for giving us a hot short guy. Short guys don’t get enough love in these stories

This pushed so many buttons for me. Love that he did all that to himself. Ethan needs more adventures

Essex. I loved this series, I waited to the end, to fully see what you conjured up. It was thrilling story. I loved the costumes, and the sex was off the chart. I am glad I read you new creation. It’s great. Caleb? He needs to be punished. All around a great read. Happy Halloween 🎃

Some honest feedback from me. The theme isn't really my kinda thing so all feedback is from a purely structural standpoint. It's in no particular order. --- I liked how you described the atmosphere. It was easy to imagine a dark and rainy night. You repeated the environmental aspects often enough to stay in the mind without becoming repetitive. Good job. I was confused by the tentacle. Was Darius a naga? Originally I thought it was part of the cape. Then I thought it was a tentacle growing out from his back? And then it was called a tail. Clearer language would have made these passages flow better. I kept going back to see if I missed something. I found the flashback a bit too long to write as a "recalling memories". A proper flashback like "ten years ago:" would have worked better given how long the passage was. I did not enjoy Darius' dialog, which is bad because 95% of the whole dialog is from him. His voice was a bit over the top and not believable. He didn't come across as evil or clever or dangerous. He came across as a bad actor, a cliche. Depending on where you wanted to go with this story this may be appropriate, maybe I had different expectations. Given your post who these characters were based on, I assume this was intentional? This may be attributed to me not really being into the theme, but the lack of an arc made the story feel like it was dragging out. After Harry was captured, nothing happened. From that point onwards the plot stagnated. Again, if this type of story is enjoyable to you and the target group, please ignore this piece of feedback. Otherwise I would have liked a bit more of a back and forth, obstacles, stakes, things that make a story. I was a bit sad that we never got to see Harry displaying his hunting skills. He was supposed to be this monster hunter who's killed several monsters in his lifetime and he loses within the first three seconds he meets Darius again. This would have been the perfect opportunity to give the two a little narrative dance, hunting each other, add some tension. --- I am hesitant to give a sort of summary of my feedback because I feel like a lot of my criticism may be an artifact of me simply not being into the theme. I know I have written stories that people not into the subject must have found incredibly boring. So please cherry pick which pieces of feedback you think have merit and ignore the rest. :)

Sweet, loved all the references (many of my favorites, Narnia included :P), and a great ending. Great job!

I'm back. I just wanted to add something extra for the author. This story is truly spectacular in your quest to make me a fan of transfiguration, I just loved it. I thought about it last night after I fell asleep. For him to find love, then have to accept such a drastic change, a loss of his individual identity to see what possibly develops. Ugh. Thank you so much. I can't wait to read more about ALPHA.

Hot. Can't wait for more.

Love it! At the same time I hope Caleb becomes aware of his situation so he can see how low he's fallen

Hot. Would love to read more.