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4/14/25, 6:28 PM
Would like to see this continued

Anonymous
4/14/25, 6:32 PM
@[JockPupTraxxx](/user/show/26244) There are two more parts

4/14/25, 6:34 PM
@[JockPupTraxxx](/user/show/26244) There are two more parts
4/14/25, 6:20 PM
I wish I was an officer in that police department.
4/13/25, 7:42 AM
A small critique, having all the dialogue be in all capitals while the descriptions are written normally gives of the vibe that all the characters are always yelling at each other. I’d recommend not doing all caps unless it’s for yelling scenes. I enjoyed the story though, that’s for sharing it!

Anonymous
4/14/25, 6:01 PM
@[Hargoni](/user/show/912212) Yes I changed it somewhat thanks for your opinion on my story I am working on another one soon
4/14/25, 5:31 PM
Can't wait for more!
4/14/25, 4:49 PM
Я мечтаю что у меня тоже был такой костюм
Aug 29, 2024
Anonymous
4/14/25, 4:43 PM
hot!!!
Art
4/14/25, 4:16 PM
You are correct as Eric and Justin were the Seals. Danny was soccer. As far as I know the author never wrote more than the first 5 chapters.
4/14/25, 3:58 PM
Damn that was insanely hot. Love it from start to finish. More please! Anyone know stories just like this too? So damn hot
4/14/25, 3:42 PM
Hot