Recent Comments

10/31/22, 10:42 PM
I wanna see what Sam can turn into!
Sebastián Apollo
10/31/22, 8:00 PM
What a coincidence, it just so happens that _dumb horny studs_ are a particular fascination of mine. Not only do I find this story, but then I find there's an entire series dedicated to this lovable stud's stupid and horny antics? Good job! And it looks like I have a few more stories to check out too!

10/31/22, 9:08 PM
Thanks, @[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736)! I came up with the idea of an oblivious controller as a way to do mind control without screwing anyone’s life over. I’m so glad it works for you!
Anonymous
10/31/22, 5:04 PM
Holy fucking shit, this was hot hot hot

10/31/22, 9:06 PM
Thank you! I appreciate the feedback.
mikegay4u
10/31/22, 8:58 PM
This story is so sexy and addictive, I just love it. I couldn't stop reading every chapter so I waited to comment. Thank you so much for revisiting it for us Jack. I can hardly wait to read the rest of "Phase Two." :stuck_out_tongue: mikegay4u
Sebastián Apollo
10/31/22, 7:31 PM
Not my gay ass actually getting giddy when I saw this uploaded 😭 Everything from the slutty Halloween costumes to the raunchy sex scenes put a smile on my face. As a reader, it's so cathartic to see some young studs finally drop the veneer of their silly pride and embrace how good it feels to be a whorish lil' fleshlight for their Master! Very well done! _(Plus, I appreciate your extra emphasis on those big boy booties this chapter, those are a weakness of mine!)_

10/31/22, 8:25 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thnank you once more for taking the time to write, I'm glad you enjoyed the ending and those big booty boys. Also, "a whorish lil’ fleshlight for their Master" is now my phrase of the week.
Martin
10/31/22, 8:21 PM
I've fixed the formatting. Please try to format the story like this yourself next time! You can check out the hints on how to do that or ask me if you don't know how.
Anonymous
10/31/22, 6:39 PM
The loss of limbs threw me off a bit, but it's an intriguing story. I hope Tommy learns a lesson though, he's way too entitled to be likeable right now. By all means keep Jason objectified and submissive, but let Karma get its dues as well!

10/31/22, 7:02 PM
I'm sure Tommy will get what's coming to him in the end ;)
Lampshade15
10/31/22, 6:19 PM
Power bottoms and subby tops are a hot combo!
Anonymous
10/31/22, 6:11 PM
Love what you’re setting up here and I’m excited to see where you go, but having the whole story as a single wall of text makes it harder to read (and fully appreciate!) Adding in line breaks would definitely improve the experience
10/31/22, 12:38 PM
Delightful! Nice slow burn on the front and a fantastic finish, well done!

10/31/22, 5:57 PM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) Thank you so much! I'm glad it worked for you! 💖