Recent Comments

10/31/22, 4:13 PM
Love it! At the same time I hope Caleb becomes aware of his situation so he can see how low he's fallen

10/31/22, 5:23 PM
@[keeprofd](/user/show/662160) Glad you liked it! I think Caleb is already too far gone and too late. He also probably doesn't care anymore. He's happy and he's sharing it.

10/31/22, 5:29 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Haha very true. Though how powerful is the eyes in psychic manipulation? An idea may be that he can create two personalities for Caleb: One as he is now and the other pre - hypnosis and no idea and memory of what has happened to him and mortified when the Eyes shows what a slut he has become. And the Eyes can switch between the two at his leisure. An Idea I had.

10/31/22, 11:19 PM
@[keeprofd](/user/show/662160) Would be nice to explore The Eyes finding a guy to toy with and beg to be taken in the end. I'll remember that.
10/31/22, 11:17 PM
Hot. Would love to read more.
10/31/22, 2:21 AM
Depraved, inhuman, unrealistic, fantastical. I loved it.

10/31/22, 11:13 PM
@[ThisisDiz](/user/show/179472) Thank you so much! I like dark fantasy.
Anonymous
10/31/22, 11:04 AM
Same as Readytochange. Would be cool to read more about the transformation details and haircut in hopeful next stories or sequels ;) Loved the story and hoping for more scally stuff from you!

10/31/22, 10:53 PM
Thanks. There’s a new chapter published!
10/31/22, 10:42 PM
I wanna see what Sam can turn into!
Sebastián Apollo
10/31/22, 8:00 PM
What a coincidence, it just so happens that _dumb horny studs_ are a particular fascination of mine. Not only do I find this story, but then I find there's an entire series dedicated to this lovable stud's stupid and horny antics? Good job! And it looks like I have a few more stories to check out too!

10/31/22, 9:08 PM
Thanks, @[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736)! I came up with the idea of an oblivious controller as a way to do mind control without screwing anyone’s life over. I’m so glad it works for you!
Anonymous
10/31/22, 5:04 PM
Holy fucking shit, this was hot hot hot

10/31/22, 9:06 PM
Thank you! I appreciate the feedback.
mikegay4u
10/31/22, 8:58 PM
This story is so sexy and addictive, I just love it. I couldn't stop reading every chapter so I waited to comment. Thank you so much for revisiting it for us Jack. I can hardly wait to read the rest of "Phase Two." :stuck_out_tongue: mikegay4u
Sebastián Apollo
10/31/22, 7:31 PM
Not my gay ass actually getting giddy when I saw this uploaded 😭 Everything from the slutty Halloween costumes to the raunchy sex scenes put a smile on my face. As a reader, it's so cathartic to see some young studs finally drop the veneer of their silly pride and embrace how good it feels to be a whorish lil' fleshlight for their Master! Very well done! _(Plus, I appreciate your extra emphasis on those big boy booties this chapter, those are a weakness of mine!)_

10/31/22, 8:25 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thnank you once more for taking the time to write, I'm glad you enjoyed the ending and those big booty boys. Also, "a whorish lil’ fleshlight for their Master" is now my phrase of the week.
Martin
10/31/22, 8:21 PM
I've fixed the formatting. Please try to format the story like this yourself next time! You can check out the hints on how to do that or ask me if you don't know how.