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10/30/22, 11:05 PM
Really enjoyed the prompt! Try to take a little more time with some stuff, some sentences were a bit too stringy. All in all a great first story, good job! Remember that if you want people to proofread for you, you can ask in the discord :)
Anonymous
10/30/22, 10:58 PM
Fuck this was hot. Hope part 2 comes soon!
10/30/22, 9:54 PM
Besides the obvious boxes in the story the box I enjoy checking off is when the author/writer takes his time to explain what the person is experiencing as he is transformed. It kept my attention all the way through. Hope there’s a next chapter if not will look for your next story
10/30/22, 8:57 PM
Damn! Would’ve loved more detail on him getting geared up and his hair cut! Hope you do more scally stuff

10/30/22, 9:33 PM
@[Readytochange](/user/show/240124) Thanks! I appreciate the feedback. I’ve always been a fan of your stories.
10/30/22, 9:21 PM
I would love to go to the circus.. Crave to be a puppet
10/30/22, 11:18 AM
Great transformation story , check off the right boxes

10/30/22, 7:35 PM
@[Bimarguy](/user/show/10006035) Aah thx, and what are those boxes?
BL Guy
10/28/22, 6:55 PM
This is soo good... You should definately add this to the cupid stories section too

10/30/22, 6:46 PM
@BL Guy Thanks! 😁 And I probably will
Anonymous
10/30/22, 6:05 PM
I loved this story so much, wondering if you happened to have a reference for satoshi

10/30/22, 6:08 PM
@[EvanIshihara96](/user/show/10002685) Yup It's not an exact reference but this pic inspired the story and was the basis for how Satoshi looks, minus the jacket https://www.deviantart.com/yuan99/art/Ash-to-surfer-6-686441065
10/30/22, 5:37 PM
Increible trabajo... me encanto :heart_eyes: :heart_eyes: :heart_eyes: aunque lo niegue Natonio va cayendo poco a poco en los planes de maxwell :3 espero con ansias el proximo cap :3
Frory
10/30/22, 5:06 PM
Damn, I wonder what happen to his father. And what Boonker plan is.