Recent Comments

10/28/22, 8:16 AM
While I personally hoped this would have gone the traditional-babysitter-fucks-the-boy way, I have to say I am so glad I was wrong. An amazing twist, really well-written, and you nailed the unrealistic aspects without making too much of a parody out of it. The only complaint I have is the format, bold for all of Ken's lines made it a bit harder for me to read, but this might be just a personal issue. Otherwise, fantastic job!

Sebastián Apollo
10/28/22, 5:56 PM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you for the kind words! I know overuse of the italics/bold is a bad habit of mine, so I definitely toned them down for my next project. Hopefully it's easier to read!
10/28/22, 9:14 AM
Certainly up to your usual filthy standard mmmm! I look forward to the next installment

10/28/22, 2:26 PM
@[Dorsetsleaze](/user/show/10002361) I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm currently working on the next part. Unfortunately, I've been taking a break from A Jocks Karma, so that wont be out for who knows how long. I hope this will be to your liking though

10/28/22, 3:22 PM
@[Rubber_Lover](/user/show/10001519) It certainly is to my liking - the combination of helplessness, sweat, smells, humiliation, really turns me on. Keep up the good work! Richard
10/23/22, 2:28 PM
First of all, I simply love both parts of the story so far. Can't wait for the next part. Dear author, pleeeeeeeeease do not drop this, it is too good. Second, some criticism (please do not take it too seriously). When I read the text, I sometimes get a feeling of a general roughness, like you didn't polish the story to the fullest. It is not a major problem, since the idea is really good, but still I can't help but notice these rougher parts. Also, I still cannot fully understand how the guys assimilated by Silo are still themselves, but I guess it all leads to the paradox of the Ship of Theseus and the question of what makes us _us_. Anyways, great job.

Kods
10/27/22, 10:35 PM
@[Arty82](/user/show/143394) I admit I might just be too used to/into absorption, merging, fusion, assimilation etc that the concepts they often deal with don't seem that difficult to grasp to me. But I can admit the idea is a bit esoteric. For _this_ story, imagine every person is a document on a computer. The document is filled with an entire beings' likes, dislikes, personal history, etc. Silo is a folder in which those documents can be stored into. The files once stored are no longer individual, but a small part of a much larger collection, that can be accessed at any time. And more importantly though Silo is the folder there is also a document for his own personality. This isn't a perfect analogy, but I hope it can provide a visualization that might work for you.

10/28/22, 12:55 PM
@[Kods](/user/show/10002779) Thank you for taking time to explain this. I can understand what you mean. So your approach is that a person is a sum total of their experience, preferences emotions etc, etc, and while the process of assimilation does replace brain matter, the, let's say, "ego" of a person is preserved although included into something bigger, which is Silo, and linked to it.
10/28/22, 12:33 PM
I did *not* see that coming! Amazing work man! I'm so hyped for this you have no idea!
10/28/22, 8:57 AM
Amazing! Caleb looks out for his little bro like any good brother would :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

10/28/22, 12:16 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) As I said, Caleb is a good boy, a good friend, a good brother and good boys share. :grin:
blankbot
10/28/22, 2:08 AM
Wow--just wow.

10/28/22, 12:15 PM
@blankbot Thank you, that's like the best compliment one could hope for! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
10/28/22, 12:41 AM
Very hot story can't wait to see Henry come over to being a slut and finally their father and meeting their new Master

10/28/22, 12:15 PM
@[Azabych](/user/show/937098) Thank you! Next chapter will be up soon and we'll see how things turn out with Caleb as a full on slut.
10/27/22, 11:33 PM
Love how Caleb not only turned into a slut but his best bro Alex and it looks like his little brother as well. I hope to see more I want to see if his dad will change as well.

10/28/22, 12:13 PM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) One more chapter to come, and who knows, Caleb is such a good, generous guy sharing his new outlook in life.
Sebastián Apollo
10/27/22, 10:59 PM
I concur with Twan, the dominance of The Eyes to bring ordinarily cocky and prideful boys to their knees is definitely a nice role reversal! I think we need some _bigger booties_ for these boys, though! 😉 Good work, as always!

10/28/22, 12:12 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the new chapter. I think big booties is the cause for everything going on :wink:
10/28/22, 9:09 AM
Ah! This story is back! I was disappointed when your stories vanished a while back. Just reading a part of it sent me overboard and had me cleaning up this early in the morning. Lol.