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billi
10/28/22, 10:12 PM
I am so sad for Kamay and all he has lost. His rank, his pride, his best friend and his father and now he has to live with that monster as his Chief... how will he ever able to get back what Booker took from him ._.
10/28/22, 10:10 PM
Was kinda hoping for a bodyswap after they put on each other's gear.
10/28/22, 10:08 PM
This is an old favorite that I just revisited because orcs have never been hotter. It's a story that can definitely handle a continuation.
10/28/22, 9:57 PM
Not gonna lie, Missed some egg laying. But I do understand it would be really difficult to add that without tf.
10/27/22, 10:23 AM
This is such a wonderful story! Looking forward to the next two parts. Hoping to learn more about the friendly, helpful neighbour. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

10/28/22, 8:34 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Trust you to find the wholesomeness! Thank you Norismo!
10/28/22, 8:16 AM
While I personally hoped this would have gone the traditional-babysitter-fucks-the-boy way, I have to say I am so glad I was wrong. An amazing twist, really well-written, and you nailed the unrealistic aspects without making too much of a parody out of it. The only complaint I have is the format, bold for all of Ken's lines made it a bit harder for me to read, but this might be just a personal issue. Otherwise, fantastic job!

Sebastián Apollo
10/28/22, 5:56 PM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you for the kind words! I know overuse of the italics/bold is a bad habit of mine, so I definitely toned them down for my next project. Hopefully it's easier to read!
10/28/22, 9:14 AM
Certainly up to your usual filthy standard mmmm! I look forward to the next installment

10/28/22, 2:26 PM
@[Dorsetsleaze](/user/show/10002361) I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm currently working on the next part. Unfortunately, I've been taking a break from A Jocks Karma, so that wont be out for who knows how long. I hope this will be to your liking though

10/28/22, 3:22 PM
@[Rubber_Lover](/user/show/10001519) It certainly is to my liking - the combination of helplessness, sweat, smells, humiliation, really turns me on. Keep up the good work! Richard
10/23/22, 2:28 PM
First of all, I simply love both parts of the story so far. Can't wait for the next part. Dear author, pleeeeeeeeease do not drop this, it is too good. Second, some criticism (please do not take it too seriously). When I read the text, I sometimes get a feeling of a general roughness, like you didn't polish the story to the fullest. It is not a major problem, since the idea is really good, but still I can't help but notice these rougher parts. Also, I still cannot fully understand how the guys assimilated by Silo are still themselves, but I guess it all leads to the paradox of the Ship of Theseus and the question of what makes us _us_. Anyways, great job.

Kods
10/27/22, 10:35 PM
@[Arty82](/user/show/143394) I admit I might just be too used to/into absorption, merging, fusion, assimilation etc that the concepts they often deal with don't seem that difficult to grasp to me. But I can admit the idea is a bit esoteric. For _this_ story, imagine every person is a document on a computer. The document is filled with an entire beings' likes, dislikes, personal history, etc. Silo is a folder in which those documents can be stored into. The files once stored are no longer individual, but a small part of a much larger collection, that can be accessed at any time. And more importantly though Silo is the folder there is also a document for his own personality. This isn't a perfect analogy, but I hope it can provide a visualization that might work for you.

10/28/22, 12:55 PM
@[Kods](/user/show/10002779) Thank you for taking time to explain this. I can understand what you mean. So your approach is that a person is a sum total of their experience, preferences emotions etc, etc, and while the process of assimilation does replace brain matter, the, let's say, "ego" of a person is preserved although included into something bigger, which is Silo, and linked to it.
10/28/22, 12:33 PM
I did *not* see that coming! Amazing work man! I'm so hyped for this you have no idea!
10/28/22, 8:57 AM
Amazing! Caleb looks out for his little bro like any good brother would :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

10/28/22, 12:16 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) As I said, Caleb is a good boy, a good friend, a good brother and good boys share. :grin: