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PromethiumJPM
10/28/22, 1:37 AM
:drooling_face::drooling_face:
10/28/22, 12:09 AM
This series has been a lot of fun to read!
10/27/22, 11:04 PM
Sounded like milk did Zeb's body good. Interested to see if the protein shake effected Vic and Zeb. I want to see Wes bury both cocks in Vic as Zeb sucks on his tits.
10/17/22, 4:35 AM
"If I had a nickel for everytime my lil slime bud ate a straight jock's brain, I'd have two nickels. Which isn't a lot, but its still strange that it happened twice."

Kods
10/27/22, 10:36 PM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) :rofl:
10/27/22, 10:20 PM
Very horny.
10/27/22, 9:50 PM
Thank you Anonymous, it was indeed a typo and I've made the edit to avoid confusion.
Nutiper
10/27/22, 9:45 PM
Salute once for your country!! 🍆 Salute twice for the Haasenpfaapeer!!! 🍆 🍆 True patriotism is a chicken in every pot and a cock in every mouth!
10/27/22, 12:22 PM
Really interesting story. I think the mental reshaping of the two heroes was especially well-done. I found the shifting POVs to be a little jarring, especially at the end when we get our third 1st-person narrator, who's never identified directly.

10/27/22, 9:23 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) A fair point about the last section. Keith does let us know that it's 'Ian', but it's true I never confirm it. It was something I thought about at the time, but I had felt it was fine.
CMC
10/27/22, 7:02 PM
I really liked this story. Superheroes becoming nameless enforcers to a corporate overlord is a great idea. A round of proofreading would have helped a lot. But I really like them being defeated by fake versions of themselves and being more confident after the change. I'd love to see more of Flow's new life as a corporate enforcers.

10/27/22, 9:20 PM
@[CMC](/user/show/116210) Thanks! Flow will be back doing his new thing, but (a) Blur will be the main focus of the next chapter.