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10/27/22, 9:50 PM
Thank you Anonymous, it was indeed a typo and I've made the edit to avoid confusion.
Nutiper
10/27/22, 9:45 PM
Salute once for your country!! 🍆 Salute twice for the Haasenpfaapeer!!! 🍆 🍆 True patriotism is a chicken in every pot and a cock in every mouth!
10/27/22, 12:22 PM
Really interesting story. I think the mental reshaping of the two heroes was especially well-done. I found the shifting POVs to be a little jarring, especially at the end when we get our third 1st-person narrator, who's never identified directly.

10/27/22, 9:23 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) A fair point about the last section. Keith does let us know that it's 'Ian', but it's true I never confirm it. It was something I thought about at the time, but I had felt it was fine.
CMC
10/27/22, 7:02 PM
I really liked this story. Superheroes becoming nameless enforcers to a corporate overlord is a great idea. A round of proofreading would have helped a lot. But I really like them being defeated by fake versions of themselves and being more confident after the change. I'd love to see more of Flow's new life as a corporate enforcers.

10/27/22, 9:20 PM
@[CMC](/user/show/116210) Thanks! Flow will be back doing his new thing, but (a) Blur will be the main focus of the next chapter.
10/27/22, 8:04 PM
My favorites parts on this and the previous chapter are the thoughts of self-deprecation and self-debasing of the main characters to their identities as heroes.

10/27/22, 9:16 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Glad you liked it! I love seeing heroes being reduced to a fragile mess, so I'm happy to hear you enjoyed that too!
10/27/22, 8:38 PM
Nice! well written too, hope there's another part planned :D

10/27/22, 9:12 PM
@[fleed412](/user/show/1031132) Thanks! There is, with a slightly different dynamic,...
10/27/22, 9:09 PM
Is it strange that I picture Betty White as Zeb’s mother explaining this all from St Olaf?
10/27/22, 6:47 PM
Any chance of getting more to this story?

Sebastián Apollo
10/27/22, 8:22 PM
@[HornyGayGuy](/user/show/802077) Maybe, I designed this as a oneshot, but I may return to it if the demand is great enough and I finish up some other story ideas I've been working on.
10/27/22, 7:51 PM
SFF normally isn't my jam, but I loved this story! So well written and amazing world building! Also, sitting in Mark's lap sounds like heaven
Oct 26, 2022
10/27/22, 6:11 AM
Arab daddies 🤤🤤🤤

peachy
10/27/22, 8:07 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) thanks so munch for liking my stories I love your rings series so much!

10/27/22, 11:59 AM
Great job, I love this story! Very hot! I hope there's a sequel, or maybe a prequel featuring that neighbor who saw him while gardening.

10/27/22, 6:47 PM
@[peachy](/user/show/10029966) Oh wow! Thank you right back. 🙏❤️