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10/24/22, 1:59 PM
Now this is _definitely_ drawing me in—it’s sensuous and mysterious and I simply need to learn more. Thanks for putting this out and I hope your well of inspiration—and time to write—don’t run dry just yet!
Frory
10/24/22, 12:01 PM
I have a feeling that the frat have a plan to humiliated black guy on Halloween night. Wish Rodney could discipline them.
10/23/22, 6:59 PM
Holy shit! This story is amazing. Technically amazing, for what it is. Like, 10/10 for execution. It starts off fast, establishing Ben and Thomas and basically telling us how the story is going to go and how, then it slows right down allowing us to savor the changes to campus during Ben’s day, slowly building to the inevitable meeting of Ben and Thomas. After which it didn’t just immediately end. We then got to savor the new Thomas and experience him get off while gloating about his huge win the perfect amount. Besides all of that, the changes were hot as fuck! I love huge arms. Ben and the other guys getting huge tatted arms is hot. Them turning into Thomas’s ideal, of tight waisted swimmers with huge tatted arms, wearing backwards ball caps with gold chains is mega hot. I’m going to reread this at least another 20 times in the next week. Thanks for posting, and writing such a great story. Hits all of my buttons in just the right satisfying way.

10/24/22, 2:58 AM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Holy moly! Thank you so much for this extremely generous comment! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I'm really glad it worked for you — I hope it keeps hitting your buttons on your rereads, ha! 😉
Frory
10/24/22, 9:55 AM
Hehehe, Can't wait for Noah to break and Daniel save Abernathy. I have feeling that Mark is actually a secret agent.
Anonymous
10/24/22, 8:35 AM
That was a great conclusion to this series... I imagined it taking place around 2011 from the beginning of this story, and so Jake singing 'The Story of Us' by Taylor Swift (released 2010) confirms my headcanon and also it's just a banger song tbh
10/22/22, 1:24 AM
Wow! Wow!

10/22/22, 3:30 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Much reply, so thanks! Wow! ,... is it wrong to be using Doge memes in 2022? Or at all? Most likely yes. Accept my apologies and my thanks!

10/24/22, 3:39 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Petition to make doge the next hero taken down? Hmmmm much to think about. Much think.
10/24/22, 3:38 AM
Hehe i love how Liam is indirectly taking control by signing up :)
10/24/22, 2:37 AM
Definitely a much more narrative chapter like you said. I'm hoping it's a set up for a slam dunk next chapter (or however many future ones). You've done a reslly good job getting me on mayor Daniel's side, as I felt myself genuinely worried for the outcome with this new antagonist. Eager to see how Daniel's regains control and bends him to his will!
Evan
10/24/22, 1:18 AM
A classic premise and you made it your own. Very, very enjoyable. Found this really hot. I loved the attempt at resistance and being overpowered. Convinced and persuading that submitting would be feel better. No stresses. The dumbing down and cumming out their thoughts was incredibly hot and I appreciated their being happy as dumb, horny models.
10/23/22, 11:59 PM
I like the castration part - but the hair loss made guys less sexy - I think diversity is important, while one dude becomes hairless, another should become hairy instead, while once cock becomes smaller, another should become larger etc.