Recent Comments

10/24/22, 2:37 AM
Definitely a much more narrative chapter like you said. I'm hoping it's a set up for a slam dunk next chapter (or however many future ones). You've done a reslly good job getting me on mayor Daniel's side, as I felt myself genuinely worried for the outcome with this new antagonist. Eager to see how Daniel's regains control and bends him to his will!
Evan
10/24/22, 1:18 AM
A classic premise and you made it your own. Very, very enjoyable. Found this really hot. I loved the attempt at resistance and being overpowered. Convinced and persuading that submitting would be feel better. No stresses. The dumbing down and cumming out their thoughts was incredibly hot and I appreciated their being happy as dumb, horny models.
10/23/22, 11:59 PM
I like the castration part - but the hair loss made guys less sexy - I think diversity is important, while one dude becomes hairless, another should become hairy instead, while once cock becomes smaller, another should become larger etc.
10/23/22, 11:59 PM
Exciting. Good story and sexy control
Evan
10/23/22, 11:45 PM
Really love this series. Having Bobby become a bit dumber. So much so that the singlet even says Dumbass. So hot. The O-Force making everyone horny and overt about it is really exciting. I love the reality changes and the different ways it changes those around him. So effective. Thanks for writing.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
10/23/22, 11:19 PM
This is going to be a great story! Obedient, compliant, the perfect boy!
Anonymous
10/23/22, 10:27 PM
I actually liked the chaos and less structure. Sometimes it works better :)
Frory
10/23/22, 9:47 PM
Nice strory
10/23/22, 9:07 PM
Quite interested to read more of this intriguing tale!