Recent Comments

10/19/22, 2:37 PM
I loved this very much! I appreciated the close look into both the personalities and the sexualities of Mark and Tim and I thought you built them up quite nicely as characters. Their family had personality, too, and it was a lot of sweet interaction, slowly building into character development for the whole family. Stories that are semi-pornographic, semi-story-focused are my bread and butter. I love writing them and I love reading them, and this very much scratched that itch! Thanks for this beautiful story.

10/19/22, 2:41 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you very much, Soren! Your feedback means a lot! I was apprehensive it wasn't naughty enough for a story in a kinky site, but it seems it is good enough :-)

10/19/22, 5:22 PM
@[topdog](/user/show/913845) Maybe not for all current readers—but for future readership I’m sure it’s naughty enough! The way I see this site is as a place for original gay fiction that has mature elements (and, sometimes, no sex—see Brad Yetts). I write tons of porn-with-plot—a lot of plot. And there’s an audience for that, even if not all of them have found their way here. Stick with it and let’s keep populating the site with this kind of writing!
10/19/22, 5:15 PM
The real question is, who is behind all of these changes? Josh is the boss, but he's also changed, so it could be Emily, the only woman, or least likely Mr. Miller.
Anonymous
5/23/19, 5:13 PM
i love gay vore stories like this i wish there where more

10/19/22, 4:37 PM
Same
10/18/22, 8:25 PM
Here's hoping the hot water guy comes back and completely brainwashes both the father and son, honestly. We stan a thick bearded plumber man enslaving the whole house and indulging his kinks or something

10/19/22, 3:07 PM
@[The Meaner Nook](/user/show/449300) Yes this is the same feeling I got from this. All we can do it hope :) Great story!

10/19/22, 4:17 PM
@[SteamPup](/user/show/10001188) he will be back but it will be a few chapters. Honestly not sure what I want to do with him yet but he’ll definitely cum back 😈
10/19/22, 4:16 PM
if you are accepting suggestions: why not make a requirement for the police force the officers to also do things like pole dacing, strip tease, escorting and whoring?
10/17/22, 4:35 PM
This was genius! From a writer to a writer, I loved the parts where you described Johnny’s experience in his centaur body—for example, when he was running. The sex was hot; I enjoyed the amount of cum; it was all great. Well done!

10/18/22, 11:39 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Aww, Thank you Soren. I'll take 'genius' from a fellow writer (especially one of your calibre!), you've really brightened up my inbox today. Although, I don't know who "Johnny" is! (a typo perhaps? :sweat_smile:)

10/18/22, 2:34 PM
@[The Dirty Spiders](/user/show/571676) Must be a brain fart! I meant Isaac. Don't know where on earth I got the name Johnny from.

10/19/22, 9:50 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Excuse my gentle joshing :smile: To be honest, I find it charming when other people make arbitrary errors when communicating; it makes me feel less alone on the world and more human. I have often mis named my _OWN_ characters, and only caught it on like, the final draft before publishing.

10/19/22, 3:59 PM
@[The Dirty Spiders](/user/show/571676) Oh, god, yeah, I do that aggressively frequently—sometimes it’s so hard to catch. I didn’t think the names Ty and Kenneth in a story I’m working on right now would be so easy to mix up, but what can you do?
Oct 15, 2022
Anonymous
10/19/22, 2:48 PM
Great story. Wish it had been longer, perhaps dedicate one chapter to each card
10/19/22, 2:48 PM
Die Jared Booker! Die! Die die die die die! And then die again!.Be smited! Be subjugated! Be banished to the shadow realm! Be punished! Be humiliated! Die! Die! die! You evil conniving knavish miscreant piece a shit! You Monster! Be sodomized! https://youtu.be/11o2LP2eyaQ Poor adorable Kamay! I hope you get freed soon(-ish) and get back to being normal(-ish) with entowa
10/19/22, 2:22 PM
EXCELLENT!