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Anonymous
10/19/22, 10:05 AM
Part 5!?
10/19/22, 1:56 AM
I really enjoyed seeing how you took it from concept when we emailed to seeing the end result. Great Job!

10/19/22, 9:48 AM
@[deanhuge](/user/show/10011384) Hey! It's deanhuge. The man of the hour I guess. :grin: Yeah, it is fun. Like, this idea essentially already existed and was taken down by the author (and was really well liked!). It feels like something that _should_ be out there in the world, and the concept fit my wheelhouse so well. I hope I did the original story justice and not just "ripped off a deleted story and made it _more_ convoluted and _less_ erotic.":sweat_smile: I do like my characters and my dialogue, but it is essentially a story about two guy merging into a centaur!
10/19/22, 4:28 AM
So good so good so good so good so good so so so so so so so so sooooi good 😍🥰🤤😛
10/19/22, 3:47 AM
Reminds me of Wesley Bracken, imaginative and freaky but...not as cynical or mean? Fave Toby Though admired how played physical form to provide the "Invisible lover." Not sure how six teated lactation fits into papa bear. Liked it but dislike when bad end cheats. Good end of positive likable if unusual tend to be more generous. While obviously not the point curious peek in on the tenement of Toby. Heh seems you be up for [the family of ten dads challenge](https://forum.gaykinkystories.com/t/run-with-this-10-dads-meme/2735) with this. Interesting development of the living store too. Like has more...positive intention. Compared to how other jobs can eat you up ..well at least can be part of something intended to be positive Wonder what happens
Anonymous
10/19/22, 1:25 AM
God this is hot. I'd love to see a toilet corruption if you have plans for one.
10/19/22, 12:13 AM
You can't leave us on a cliff hanger like this! "Oh, he did notice" was maybe my favorite quote so far, it just cracked me up. Do notice that in Liam's first paragraph you accidentally jump between first and third person and sometimes repeating words in a sentence because of that, but it's no big deal :)
10/19/22, 12:02 AM
Very interesting. Can't wait for more.
10/18/22, 10:47 PM
Looking forward to future chapters. Obviously Tom is learning to be a 'Good Boy'. I just wonder what else he will learn & if his folks have anything to do with it [??]. I do agree that his 'change' in outlook & behavior was a little sudden, but I still enjoyed this chapter. [Perhaps the author might 'consider' a few tapes that would change some of Tom's 'prior-memories', [like making him a studious nerd for example rather than the total slacker he now is] & thus affecting his current behavior [???] ... Also a change in self image [body image] & sexual tastes might be in order? I always enjoy stories where a character develops a radically new personality based on the new implanted past memories .
Jan 30, 2019
10/18/22, 10:23 PM
Somehow i missed the straight tag, nonetheless it was a great story
Mac
10/18/22, 10:17 PM
Please continue this with more victims and even more humiliation. Great idea and very well written.