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10/18/22, 8:46 PM
It's nice to see that Skippy got a break from the intensity of the past few days(?). It's interesting to see how he really leaned into the submissive persona. You do have a slight typo: "This one opened into a decent size bathroom. Nothing like Titans, and a bit smaller then Skippys" I'm assuming you meant to say Sparky's.
Dannie
10/18/22, 8:26 PM
This was very hot. Definitely want to read a part 2 that shows more of what Master Jerry has in mind. I am curious about Graham's development now that his sexual orientation has been fixed and his sense of style adjusted. The white tux should make an appearance.
Anonymous
10/18/22, 4:34 PM
LOVED THIS SERIES - DID THE SHIP EVER COME BACK?
10/17/22, 11:07 PM
I definitely have enormous empathy for Brad and his mates as they are pushed ever closer by the coach to severe blue balls. 🥴😬 I too feel like I’m increasingly edged to the next level with each chapter as I read further. I sense there may be many parallels between the coach and Norismo (I’m just throwing it out there).🤫 The torture for me being I’m not sure whether I want this series to be a mega-chapter tome or have it nicely wrapped up in the next chapter or two in order to remedy my case of blue balls. Who am I kidding? I want many more chapters as I’m thoroughly enjoying being given ‘new pages of the playbook’ as Norismo develops the plot in ways I have not anticipated. I’m a edge player from way back; come on Norismo bring it on.🤪

10/18/22, 4:08 PM
@[Taurus68](/user/show/10025183) More chapters it is :triumph: Thank you so much for such kind words.
10/11/22, 8:42 AM
Definitely the hottest story I've eve read. Flew through the whole series, and shot a bunch of loads along the way. Thank you!!!

10/18/22, 2:22 PM
@[bbwhore2use](/user/show/10020632) Glad you enjoyed it all.
10/18/22, 2:17 PM
Feels a little rushed, with a little too much _telling_ us about Joseph's changes and not quite enough _showing_ them to us. But otherwise this chapter is a good set-up, and I look forward to reading more!
10/18/22, 5:45 AM
It's this an alternative to chapter 5, or does this begin somewhere else?

10/18/22, 10:27 AM
@[Alsace-Lorraine](/user/show/908363) This chapter diverges at the end of Chapter 4, where Connor wins against the Prince instead of losing.

10/18/22, 1:58 PM
@[GoonNoob](/user/show/10004535) Thanks, I prefer this ending.
10/17/22, 7:35 PM
Very interesting

10/18/22, 12:58 PM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) Thank you! I am excited for what I have planned.
10/17/22, 4:39 PM
I’m curious about what this story will entail! I like the little threads you’ve set up, and I’ll certainly be following future chapters to see what happens.

10/18/22, 12:58 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank You! I am going to try to have at least one chapter a week out. I have a good idea timeline going.
10/18/22, 12:26 PM
One of the best stories on this site