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Mac
10/18/22, 10:17 PM
Please continue this with more victims and even more humiliation. Great idea and very well written.
10/18/22, 9:42 PM
This literally gets better and better. AMAZING work.
10/18/22, 9:25 PM
Perhaps, Mikey will have some 'new' previous memories suggested to him..[ about his always being bullied back in school ?? How about starting to remember that when he's stressed-out he's ALWAYS had a problem pissing his pants ?? Perhaps he's starting to remember that he's always felt inferior to his more manly school & work chums ???] Perhaps he now remembers that he's always been a weak little Beta 'boy', secretly admiring all the SUPERIOR Alpha Men [Bros]....And of course isn't it about time that he starts to totally forget [or lose-all-interest] in the front-office girl...After all he's beginning to realize that he's NOT MAN ENOUGH to satisfy a women, and NEVER has been, [& he suddenly realizes the she, like all the previous women in his past, is actually laughing at his true natural inferiority behind his back !] ....Also perhaps the story could at some point develop into Mikey's 'new' memories of having always acutely been ashamed of his total lack of endowment???.....Just some ideas that your first three chapters suggested to me , as you see I'm into total corruption & changing a fellows previous memories to develop a new [different] reality! But come-on and please, give us a new [nice long] chapter !!!
10/16/22, 3:24 PM
Wow, I fucking loved this! The detail was immaculate—from the moment when Aaron feels Seth’s sperm trying to shove itself into his rectal walls to all the visceral descriptions of Noxiel and the fuck. I thought the theme and reversal of “sin” as a concept was very clever and thoughtful. Also dig the pain play kink, I don’t see enough of that here and I’ve been deliberately avoiding putting it into my stories so as not to scare people off, haha. I’m not demanding you write anything you don’t want to, but as someone who has had several stories I really care about receive lukewarm response, I encourage you to carry on with what you genuinely want to write regardless of the reception. Chasing it will only make the writing emptier than if you wrote for the bliss of writing, worldbuilding, creating, etc. There’s always a balance to be struck, to be fair, and as writers we also tend to feed off good feedback, so it’s totally up to you. Good luck on your future writing! I have you followed and I’ll be looking out for more mpreg and cum inflation!

Arachnus
10/18/22, 9:14 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I'll give it some thought. You've plenty of hot stories yourself, and it's nice to hear my imagination isn't as scary as I think.
10/18/22, 8:46 PM
It's nice to see that Skippy got a break from the intensity of the past few days(?). It's interesting to see how he really leaned into the submissive persona. You do have a slight typo: "This one opened into a decent size bathroom. Nothing like Titans, and a bit smaller then Skippys" I'm assuming you meant to say Sparky's.
Dannie
10/18/22, 8:26 PM
This was very hot. Definitely want to read a part 2 that shows more of what Master Jerry has in mind. I am curious about Graham's development now that his sexual orientation has been fixed and his sense of style adjusted. The white tux should make an appearance.
Anonymous
10/18/22, 4:34 PM
LOVED THIS SERIES - DID THE SHIP EVER COME BACK?
10/17/22, 11:07 PM
I definitely have enormous empathy for Brad and his mates as they are pushed ever closer by the coach to severe blue balls. 🥴😬 I too feel like I’m increasingly edged to the next level with each chapter as I read further. I sense there may be many parallels between the coach and Norismo (I’m just throwing it out there).🤫 The torture for me being I’m not sure whether I want this series to be a mega-chapter tome or have it nicely wrapped up in the next chapter or two in order to remedy my case of blue balls. Who am I kidding? I want many more chapters as I’m thoroughly enjoying being given ‘new pages of the playbook’ as Norismo develops the plot in ways I have not anticipated. I’m a edge player from way back; come on Norismo bring it on.🤪

10/18/22, 4:08 PM
@[Taurus68](/user/show/10025183) More chapters it is :triumph: Thank you so much for such kind words.
10/11/22, 8:42 AM
Definitely the hottest story I've eve read. Flew through the whole series, and shot a bunch of loads along the way. Thank you!!!

10/18/22, 2:22 PM
@[bbwhore2use](/user/show/10020632) Glad you enjoyed it all.
10/18/22, 2:17 PM
Feels a little rushed, with a little too much _telling_ us about Joseph's changes and not quite enough _showing_ them to us. But otherwise this chapter is a good set-up, and I look forward to reading more!