Recent Comments

7/8/22, 12:17 AM
Oh wow. I just binge read this at work. Fantastic story! I'm very much looking forward to the rest!

10/18/22, 2:31 AM
@[Frapsity](/user/show/268897) Read “Mr Red” it’s a story set in the same multiverse.
9/30/22, 6:02 AM
I really really need to find Byron. My hormones are so low I'm going to start fainting unless i get a fix very soon. Unfortunately this story seems to be driving my hormones even lower. My need is getting more and more desperate. Still, the story is so hot, I'm going to have to risk reading the next chapter. Wish me luck!

10/18/22, 2:30 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) When you finish, read “Mr Red” it’s a story set in the same multiverse.
10/18/22, 1:49 AM
This is the best story! Thank you
10/18/22, 1:16 AM
What a great start!
Tyrol
10/18/22, 1:04 AM
Love the whole wrongness of "I should be bottoming". That's probably going to have some great payoff.
10/18/22, 12:55 AM
Just read the entire series, up through this one - straight through. Fucking amazing. You're a terrific writer and I can't wait for the next one!
10/18/22, 12:39 AM
I’m always impressed by your stories. I think you do a masterful job of creating a realistic version of the characters comic book personas. Amanda Waller how I love her. She is my favorite character in the series. She gets demolished in the previous chapter, and like a Phoenix she rises, and is back at it, trying to beat Lex and destroy his plans. A marvelous civil servant. Tim, my favorite Robin is still trying to out think the master. It is truly great to see him in action. He choose to submit to the group, but he still has a flash of cockiness I find admirable. Donnie gets the best of his short appearances. He got Conner, then Tim, followed by Dick. Now, Bart…I’d say if Lex wins, and he dies, he is a legend. Please don’t harm him, too much. So the pack is on a mission to add a second speedster. That makes the team pretty formidable. Waiting for Lex Luther next move. All agree he’s ahead. PS: Red Hood is missing? What did you do to him?
Anonymous
10/16/22, 8:55 PM
Okay. Story was hot, but . . . 1. We need backstory. How does the stepfather hypnotize the stepson? 2. Follow-up. What happens to Eddy now that he's a farm-boI? You got the making of a good series. Don't stop. There's at least one reader who can't wait for the next chapters.

10/17/22, 11:46 PM
Dis. Dis so much! You can add another reader who can’t wait!
EntrancedGay92
10/17/22, 11:16 PM
As a married man, I just love stories like this.