Recent Comments

10/17/22, 7:50 PM
I love that this is a slowly developing story, told in the first-person...but I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I'm enjoying the slow corruption of the main character. Like the idea of a former non-drinker becoming a full blown alcoholic& not even realizing it...How about 'smoking' ?? Also enjoy that he's losing his inhibitions & has started jacking-off at work. Is it time for him to start having more problems with his bladder-control ? [a good excuse for getting rid of his polyester [wool] suit & start wearing a workman's outfit[??] I really like the fact that he doesn't quite realize the changes: Just wonder when he's going to start preferring being called Mikey & find himself referring to the other men as BRO ! Hope to see him develop into a dumb, pants pissing beta guy, servicing the co's real Alpha men !!!
10/17/22, 6:15 PM
Loved it. A vampire fantasy always dreamed of. 👍

10/17/22, 7:34 PM
@[DW58](/user/show/10003124) So glad you did, thank you!
10/17/22, 7:27 PM
Loved it. Can't wait to read more.
10/17/22, 7:17 PM
Great going. Waiting for more.
10/17/22, 5:47 PM
Wow!! Another winner—- again, just need more of it! Great concept!
Fred W Kong
10/17/22, 5:18 PM
That last act was extremely sexy, great work. As a man who loves any content guaranteed to give She Who Must Not Be Named hives, fanTAStic work. As fic this is much closer to the movies than the books, which definitely works to its benefit. Finally, great characterisation on the Twins. The first two scenes were a bit slow (I don't think that was really avoidable, there was some setup to do) but the twins were a big highlight in that first scene. They're written in such a fun way that felt true to the performance in the films.
Anonymous
10/17/22, 4:44 PM
Please continue this story!
Frory
10/17/22, 3:53 PM
Yay Booker, take over the village.
10/17/22, 3:07 PM
Really reminded me of that comic. What a lovely piece. Just missing the dog tf~
10/17/22, 2:55 PM
Not gonna lie. I was expecting the turn against Max, but I thought you'd make it Luke who'd be his Master~ None the less amazing work! Looking forward to more!