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10/18/22, 12:39 AM
I’m always impressed by your stories. I think you do a masterful job of creating a realistic version of the characters comic book personas. Amanda Waller how I love her. She is my favorite character in the series. She gets demolished in the previous chapter, and like a Phoenix she rises, and is back at it, trying to beat Lex and destroy his plans. A marvelous civil servant. Tim, my favorite Robin is still trying to out think the master. It is truly great to see him in action. He choose to submit to the group, but he still has a flash of cockiness I find admirable. Donnie gets the best of his short appearances. He got Conner, then Tim, followed by Dick. Now, Bart…I’d say if Lex wins, and he dies, he is a legend. Please don’t harm him, too much. So the pack is on a mission to add a second speedster. That makes the team pretty formidable. Waiting for Lex Luther next move. All agree he’s ahead. PS: Red Hood is missing? What did you do to him?
Anonymous
10/16/22, 8:55 PM
Okay. Story was hot, but . . . 1. We need backstory. How does the stepfather hypnotize the stepson? 2. Follow-up. What happens to Eddy now that he's a farm-boI? You got the making of a good series. Don't stop. There's at least one reader who can't wait for the next chapters.

10/17/22, 11:46 PM
Dis. Dis so much! You can add another reader who can’t wait!
EntrancedGay92
10/17/22, 11:16 PM
As a married man, I just love stories like this.
10/17/22, 10:11 PM
This type of stories make me so H, i hope you can write more like this there very few almost on the entire web.
10/17/22, 8:53 PM
You know I never got into these kind of "steal your man, oblivious" stories, but im really into them now.
10/17/22, 7:50 PM
I love that this is a slowly developing story, told in the first-person...but I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I'm enjoying the slow corruption of the main character. Like the idea of a former non-drinker becoming a full blown alcoholic& not even realizing it...How about 'smoking' ?? Also enjoy that he's losing his inhibitions & has started jacking-off at work. Is it time for him to start having more problems with his bladder-control ? [a good excuse for getting rid of his polyester [wool] suit & start wearing a workman's outfit[??] I really like the fact that he doesn't quite realize the changes: Just wonder when he's going to start preferring being called Mikey & find himself referring to the other men as BRO ! Hope to see him develop into a dumb, pants pissing beta guy, servicing the co's real Alpha men !!!
10/17/22, 6:15 PM
Loved it. A vampire fantasy always dreamed of. 👍

10/17/22, 7:34 PM
@[DW58](/user/show/10003124) So glad you did, thank you!
10/17/22, 7:27 PM
Loved it. Can't wait to read more.
10/17/22, 7:17 PM
Great going. Waiting for more.
10/17/22, 5:47 PM
Wow!! Another winner—- again, just need more of it! Great concept!