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10/15/22, 1:42 PM
So unexpected, and really well written. Thank you for creating something that truly gives us a whole new level of perversion to β€œwork” with! :wink: Just amazing.

10/15/22, 2:24 PM
@[ShearedHog](/user/show/10006874) Thank you! Always happy to assist people with their "work" πŸ™‚
10/14/22, 6:20 AM
This was strange, but hot! Hope we see the ex bf return and get changed, very curious for the rest of the series

10/15/22, 2:24 PM
@[JTransform](/user/show/926964) Thanks for reading! We'll definitely catch up with Joe in. Later chapter.
Ming pygmy
10/15/22, 10:42 AM
How long till next parts
10/15/22, 9:06 AM
@GoonNoob you are a very talented writer! I read this amazing, erotic epic over the last four days. I don't know how you kept track of the various combinations of characters let alone there actions, locators and plot elements. This is such an unique premise and a quagmire from which the characters must extricate themselves. Of all the characters i enjoyed Pete's evolution the most.* I like jocks being taken down a bunch of pegs, but you gave him a path forward [or straight ahead] that I believe might lead him to bi- but not as much straight sex with Johnny. Excellent job! Thank you! :vulcan_salute: LLAP

10/15/22, 10:32 AM
@[tankonpoint](/user/show/697931) Thank you very much :) Not gonna lie, the last 2 chapters i needed a spread sheet in order to keep track of who was fucking who, where and when, and both top and bottoming, in order to make sure that everyone got their dues ;) . It was definately a story that started as a simple premise and then exploded as i kept writing, so really fab to read it being appreciated. LLAP
10/15/22, 3:38 AM
Love the call back with the calling for the doctor. Very sexy concept!

10/15/22, 9:55 AM
@[BlondieBoy](/user/show/2505879) Thank you! I appreciate it!

10/15/22, 10:13 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) This is definitely my favorite series in a while! It's a very hot universe and several chapters have become quick faves. Are you in the GSS discord per chance? Would be fun to chat 😁
10/15/22, 2:56 AM
I definitely like the whole reprogramming scenes, but it also felt cliche as they were being programmed to be drones or sex slaves. I think for me I want to see the drone angle in new ways. Nobody ever addresses people who might go along with the program whether they are forced to and they willingly want to go along. Just my two cents!!

10/15/22, 9:51 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thanks for the feedback. I like the idea. Reminds me of a story I read on here about spiderman, a while back,...
10/15/22, 1:57 AM
the old reverse Turing test, eh?

10/15/22, 9:46 AM
@[Min-Maxed Men](/user/show/10028952) ?he ,tset gniruT esrever dlo eht
Evan
10/15/22, 9:36 AM
Enjoyed this, thanks for writing. I actually didn't see the twist coming. I hope they enjoy their new life as dogboys for Marco.
Anonymous
10/15/22, 9:22 AM
So glad you said SUEZ instead of SERCO, Retarded company
10/15/22, 8:22 AM
Works as a one off but I'd love to see more in another chapter!