Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/15/22, 8:58 PM
Awesome story! Hope there will be more!
Nutiper
10/15/22, 8:25 PM
I briefly googled _toh uwakaru_ to see if there was a bilingual in-joke to it—before pausing, spelling it out, and going "OH, twerking." I am very intelligent! I wish real police officers were trained in the art of _toh uwakaru_, I think it would solve many of society's ills. Alas!!! Such utopian dreams are relegated to the land of fiction... (Or, well, the land of Himbotown.) All these former policemen in the pay of the High Himbo Club is mighty suspicious, though. I hope Carrington isn't walking into a trap that he won't be able to Downward Doggy himself out of...!
10/15/22, 7:21 PM
Really enjoyed this story!! The slow & gradual hair growth is so hot for me and hard to find. All of the mind control and mental shift added a ton as well. Would love to see more!!
10/15/22, 2:47 AM
Great story keeps getting better and better!

10/15/22, 6:46 PM
@[Mrdick](/user/show/1001656) I'm so glad to hear you've been enjoying it :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Willie Cici
10/15/22, 5:10 PM
I love stories with wicked twists. This was great. And, BlondieBoy is right. You need another chapter to see how they end up. Hot!!!
Kent
10/15/22, 4:57 PM
Love this story so happy to see it back
10/15/22, 4:43 PM
So far, this is the best Halloween competition story I've seen, hands down. I love the way you erase the victims' sense of themselves as anything other than a food source for their owner.
10/15/22, 4:31 PM
Wow, that was really hot. Would like to know where they both will end up. Are there tapes to turn men into dumb apes too? :D
10/14/22, 3:04 PM
when will we see the next chapter edlam pls

Anonymous
10/15/22, 4:07 PM
Agree Hopefully soon@[Jerry96](/user/show/10003899)
10/15/22, 3:47 PM
That's a good story ! 😳 I thought you were not going to describe the hypnotic part first with Luke's brainwashing, but the twist was very good, as I really love the way Max fell into the trap !