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10/14/22, 4:02 PM
The scenes with Colin are really hot. The dialogue bits with DarkThrone just never quite work for me, in part because he's such a two-dimensional pantomime villain. Also, for me, DarkThrone's monologue about having sex with the model is no substitute for an actual sex scene; it's one of the places where your unconventional mode of narration just gets in the way of the story you're trying to tell. But I do think the ending with KING's rise to power feels very fitting.

10/14/22, 10:11 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Yeah, this style had some real limitations I've struggled with. I'd only planned to write the first 'Target Audience' story and leave it at that. As much as I enjoyed exploring things here, I'll be glad to get back to some traditional stuff.
10/14/22, 8:21 PM
A great story. Chilling *and* sexy.

10/14/22, 10:04 PM
@[Evelded](/user/show/1215920) Thank you! Glad you liked it!
10/14/22, 9:52 PM
I wonder what his friends will be turned into
Anonymous
10/14/22, 9:45 PM
Really excited to read more of this!
10/14/22, 5:59 PM
Definitely enjoying the body horror elements of each of these, excellent work! Really imaginative horror here.

10/14/22, 9:14 PM
@[Wesley Bracken](/user/show/13596) Thanks Wes. Your work is obviously a big inspiration ❤️
Lavender Lad
10/14/22, 7:06 PM
Hope the imam gets more involved with chafiq in the next chapters it could a sort of double brainwashing where the imam brainwashes chafiq into brainwashing. The grammatically weird Arabic in this chapter was a bit distracting though other than definitely looking forward to the set up you have here with chafiq becoming conflicted about what he is doing
Cwc
10/14/22, 7:06 PM
This story was super cool and great premise. Would love to see it develop more!
Cubby
10/14/22, 6:10 PM
No other stories on this site get me as hard as yours. I’ve been rereading your stories when I jerk off lately and it’s been incredible. Thank you for all the intense orgasms!
10/14/22, 5:22 PM
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10/14/22, 4:09 PM
Omg this is so freaking hot… milking big dick himbos with his tight hole as a method of investigation and questioning??? I FUCKING LOVE IT. So hot seeing Detective Carrington as a very competent, power bottom investigator. And I can’t wait to see more of his slutty skills with so many hung, hot himbo dude bros around!!! I love this story so much!