Recent Comments

Oct 10, 2022
Silas
10/11/22, 11:50 PM
Love it!
10/11/22, 1:48 PM
This new addition actually resonated with me quite a lot, very hot towards the end! I would agree that the lack of speaker identification was confusing as the characters increased towards the end though.

10/11/22, 9:58 PM
@[rodjock](/user/show/227582) Glad you enjoyed the story, and I promise to keep working on the speaker trouble. Thanks!
Oct 10, 2022
10/11/22, 9:57 PM
Hot as hell. Loved it.
10/11/22, 9:47 PM
So hot snd creative!!! Would love to read more, especially the karma/revenge stuff

10/11/22, 9:56 PM
@[Horn](/user/show/1014477) Aww! Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
Anonymous
10/10/22, 1:08 AM
Stanley is amazing, and the art is a great addition! love love love all the bald men you write about.

10/11/22, 9:54 PM
Good cause it's all I want to write about
Anonymous
10/11/22, 8:39 PM
Mwah, chefs kiss
10/11/22, 5:55 PM
Definitely well worth the wait. Can’t wait to see his subconscious commands in action 🤣. I love this series ❤️
Anonymous
10/11/22, 5:20 PM
This is amazing and can I say what an amazing journey to go along side him!
Carus
10/9/22, 1:17 AM
It'd be amazing and 5* if the issue with using the wrong plurals gets fixed. As it tends to use "midshipmen" when it should be "midshipman". "Emergence" should be emergency etc. However that's really the only issue with it.

10/9/22, 5:58 AM
@[Carus](/user/show/10001298) Thanks for pointing out the midshipmen vs midshipman mistake. I completely overlooked that. Grammer and mechanics are the weakest part of my writing so I'm sure I'll (and others) will find more as it's reread. But I'm glad to hear it was still a good story

Anonymous
10/11/22, 6:44 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) how do u read said stories

10/11/22, 12:51 PM
I'm unclear what kind of story you mean by said stories? We weren't talking about any particular kind of story?
Anonymous
10/11/22, 12:37 PM
Can't wait to see where the next chapter goes.