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Oct 10, 2022
10/10/22, 11:22 PM
So hot. Love seeing a straight smart guy turn into a gay slut with little going on in their heads expect sex and fellowers.
10/10/22, 4:34 PM
Just because Luke did not cast the spell with Scott present doesn't mean he didn't cast it back at the ROTC barracks, without Scott being aware. That would tie up loose ends for Luke and also keep Scott from seeking (and, possibly, finding) help before he found himself inescapably in Luke's thrall. A couple more chapters showing us that someone who screws up is not the only one to suffer consequences would be a very military style lesson for Luke to teach Alex and Scott. Also, it would be even hotter if Scott was straight to begin with, not just transforming into a complete slave, but transforming from straight to gay at the same time. Perhaps, halfway through the change or so, he becomes aware of what is happening to him, but is too far along to do anything about his transformation. Just some thoughts about how this very hot story could be longer and hotter.

10/10/22, 11:02 PM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) And that was the threat Luke made when he held up a piece of Scott's clothing. But As Luke said he wants those who want to be broken and molded so it wouldn't really fit for him to do it. But yes that would be a way to add more.
10/10/22, 4:07 PM
Wow, what a fun, arousing twist! 😛😛😛 I sure hope you'll share more with us from your kinky imagination! 😍

10/10/22, 10:59 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thank you, glad you enjoyed it and you will see more. It will take time but I'll have more
Oct 10, 2022
CMC
10/10/22, 10:00 PM
I love this so much! Great use of 'influencer' culture. And I love how their followers try to look and act just like them in the end.
10/10/22, 8:43 PM
SO fantastic so far, and I really appreciated this chapter! Now I'm looking forward to reading the rest. 😏
Oct 10, 2022
10/10/22, 8:28 PM
Fantastic story! It's grounded just enough in real-life addictive behavior to make the story feel terrifyingly plausible. I wasn't sure about the body change elements at first, because they broke that feeling of realism, but I thought the physical changes to "Jake and Jack" ultimately had a great payoff.
10/10/22, 8:10 PM
Great story!
Oct 10, 2022
10/10/22, 4:58 PM
Damn. This is so well written. I never thought i'd see a psychological horror shift so naturally into erotica, but you pulled it off. God_damn_.
10/10/22, 3:38 AM
Great work!! Love how the characters progressed! You write excellent tf content 🤤💕.

10/10/22, 4:54 PM
@[drewfy](/user/show/10021368) Thanks Bud! Getting folks excited about TF makes it all worthwhile!