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10/9/22, 6:57 PM
Guess that this comes after the canon ending where Jared escaped and the rest of the explorers became qayllar. Hopefully the Prince is able to save himself and his tribe and give Jared what he deserves this time, somewhat like the alternate ending to the last story

10/10/22, 1:58 AM
@[Stormbound](/user/show/312438) Technically, and this was the due to the client who paid for that alt chapter, it could be either endings as he specifically wanted that alt chapter to not effect **Two Tops Make A Bottom**
10/9/22, 6:44 PM
Its great to see this saga continuing, but I knew that Kamay fate was gonna happen. What I wasn't expecting it was Booker that did it. I am sad about what happened, but I am pissed off LOL.... I would have been more shocked if it was his best friend that fell into that type of fate by Booker or the one that doesn't like Kamay. So I think I will wait for more chapters to come in continuing reading. You are an amazing writing but I was not expecting my on personal reaction to be pissed off LOL. It will be very interesting to see how this plays out.

10/10/22, 1:56 AM
@[TeddybearTO](/user/show/10005146) I won't spoil anything but I'll say that i've learned as writer about reader expectations when several chapters are devoted to a character's struggle and how that should resolve, so don't worry, you're in good hands... i think lol.
Evan
10/10/22, 1:44 AM
This is a great opening setup. Love the descriptions and especially his inability it resist giving into that pleasure when he touched himself. Great job! Thanks for writing. Hope to see more if you choose to continue.
10/10/22, 1:43 AM
Hot n horny story. Cigars, mind control and daddy domination :white_check_mark::white_check_mark::white_check_mark: Fantastic :wink:
10/10/22, 1:24 AM
I think the confusion comes from this reading as if it's the continuation of another story. You're not really introduced to the characters and their roles before the sudden role reversal happens. Like only after the reversal you're really given the context of what's happening. It's like being thrown into the second half of a story where you missed the first half.
Mar 20, 2015
10/10/22, 1:06 AM
Hot story. Needs a part 2 to really get the juices flowing, but a great beginning nevertheless.
Anonymous
10/8/22, 10:49 AM
Love it! Thanks for posting it.

10/10/22, 1:03 AM
@[Jock](/user/show/1004354) and i appreciate anyone bothering to read my work
10/10/22, 1:02 AM
Just read both chapters. The second chapter is what got me! I like the dad’s obliviousness. Perhaps im the next chapter, he can step in and do some demonstrations as well? Can’t wait to see more
10/10/22, 1:01 AM
Really hot transformation. Whould be hot to know what happened to the diaper jocks!
Carus
10/9/22, 10:39 PM
Grammerly, even the free one, can often pick up misspellings that are spelled right but not the right word, so if you're looking then maybe give that a try otherwise I'm sure myself or somone else can help edit any stories.

10/9/22, 11:18 PM
@[Carus](/user/show/10001298) I tend to be too lazy to deal with those and just re read it myself. I might have to do more before I post the next story here.