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10/8/22, 10:29 PM
Can't wait for the story to continue.
Nov 2, 2021
10/8/22, 10:08 PM
Hot as fuck. Reading this milked multiple loads outta my scallycock
10/8/22, 9:00 PM
This is super fun. I wonder if rimming will come into it. Hehe But yeah this is super fun!

10/8/22, 9:18 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I can certainly put rimming in if you want, I'll see what I can do.

10/8/22, 9:32 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Oh man that would be awesome. I mean the coach rimming all the boys to make sure they don't have whatever. And maybe after that the boys themselves rim each other because you gotta take care of a bro. Sexy stuff by the way. I also like the fingering to check and stuff. That and the musk of the crotch causing the guy to fall asleep. So fun! Oh, I also like the mystery of what is going on. The fact that something is causing the females to leave but nobody seems to think its a big deal is interesting.

10/8/22, 9:55 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I'm glad to hear you're invested in the story :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Anonymous
10/8/22, 9:24 PM
Such blue balls waiting
10/8/22, 8:30 PM
I read all 4 parts last night and blew a huge load. This is one of the best series I've read on here, and I'm excited for more. You're very creative. I love twisted stories like this. Keep it up. I'm hungry for more.

10/8/22, 8:32 PM
@Heir2012 Well, thank you! Next one's nearly done, so I hope you enjoy that one too!
Roman
10/8/22, 7:46 PM
Very hot, now you need to illustrate it. Nothing hotter than a bodybuilder with a pussy

10/8/22, 7:48 PM
@Roman I have some illustrations of Luke and other characters on my Twitter! You should also read the reboot/remake of this story, Luke's Big Butt :)
10/8/22, 7:12 PM
B for better studio and more role plays
Anonymous
10/8/22, 4:22 PM
C, he needs that Rando cock
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10/8/22, 3:56 PM
Damn, I was really enjoying the antimilitarism in the early chapters. shame ☹️
10/8/22, 6:43 AM
Something tells me that this ending won't be exactly surprising, quite the opposite, but it won't stop being good nonetheless.

10/8/22, 2:52 PM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) To me a good ending shouldn't be a surprise, it might not go exactly as you expect but it should make since given the characters which if I've done my job you should know well enough to know what they're mostly going to do. So it sounds like I'm doing my job right.