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10/6/22, 1:25 AM
A satisfying story. It didn't end like I thought it would. I liked your ending.

10/6/22, 1:42 AM
@Cutlerfan LOL Thank you for that... _carefully crafted_ comment :grin: :wink:

10/7/22, 6:24 PM
@The Dirty Spiders....I fully agree with Cutlerfan. This was NOT the ending I was expecting, but it was satisfying and vague enough to allow a continuance if you desired.

10/8/22, 12:32 AM
@zimdog Hehe. It would need to be a very compelling reason for Benny to ever willingly go through that again...
10/7/22, 10:09 PM
This is an incredible story. I'm enjoying each chapter very much. But I have to say that my sexual enjoyment of it has been muted these last two chapters. I enjoyed the chapters with the hypnosis and overt conditioning much more; that is, after all, why I'm on this site. You're showing sophistication and thoughtfulness in exploring the real life results of the conditioning, and I do appreciate that. This is still one of the best stories I've read in years. The D/s aspects between Liam and Trevor, and now Trevor and Omar, are no doubt sufficient replacement for most of your readers, but I'm afraid they don't have the same punch for me. At this point, I don't really think you'll be able to refocus back on that. The conditioning is pretty much finished; we're seeing the endgame, the results. I just wish you'd spent longer exploring that part.

10/7/22, 11:41 PM
@meatheadosis There is still more to come! It's just I'm a stickler for details and realism, and I know if I were to do every single facet of military brainwashing the story would never end. The next few chapters will be the last of the series, and there will be more brainwashing scenes included.
Zero
10/7/22, 2:43 PM
ooh interesting are we gonna see both brothers fall under the sway of the commander?

10/7/22, 10:23 PM
@Zero One more part to find out
10/7/22, 9:17 PM
Thinking about it, an "Army Soldier" fetish is kind of the perfect intersection of what we've seen in your other stories: the muscles and workout focus of a jockboy, the discipline and urge to please of a (preppy) good boy, and the uniform and team attutude of a soccer player (ok, they all have a toe of discipline, but still).
10/7/22, 9:04 PM
Great story! Keeps you wondering what's next. Really looking forward to reading more of it.
10/7/22, 8:29 PM
Love this series! I keep coming back to reread!
10/7/22, 7:02 PM
I love the story 7 you're a very gifted writer. I will reserve my comments until I get to the most recent chapter.
Fangz the Pup
10/7/22, 7:59 AM
Another lovely read Papa Spider! Rereading the parts I was confused, it made sense and fully enlighten the expeirnece of sexy were car men!<3

10/7/22, 2:48 PM
@Fangz the Pup ❤️ And so much unused lore! (Maybe a chapter two *en route*)
Fangz the Pup
10/7/22, 8:43 AM
I'll admit... what a Rollercoaster. Here I was getting prepping myself for the sexy shit- start of the Rollercoaster. Randomly feeling I'm just reading a college sitcom about a jocks dilemma and an actors future almost fucked- rising to the top. The breif talk to the magician kids... the transformation... tinkering at the edge... _Woosh!_ I wasn't expecting a full sex adventure with a centaur fucking close ties with Benny!! Best read once again Papa Spider <3

10/7/22, 2:46 PM
@Fangz the Pup What a lovely comment❤️ We should try a centaur merger some time. I’ll even be the back bit.
Zero
10/7/22, 2:20 PM
ooh any chance we get to see the rest of the batboys fall into the pack? looking forward to what comes next.