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bucke
10/8/22, 12:15 AM
Can't believe there is only one more part left. I'm greedy for more. I love it because while I can predict somewhat what will happen next, some other aspects I have no idea how you will end it so am very excited for the last part, but also sad that it'll be the end. I know you said after the end you didn't really see a way to continue, but do you plan on writing more here? I love your stuff and I feel like this more uniform/military aspect is not as common to see on this site.

10/8/22, 4:43 AM
@bucke I hope I leave you wanting more but also satisfied with the ending. And I do plan on writing more, I already have the first part of another story (also military themed) written and I might post it as I write it which will mean long periods between chapters but also that readers can help inspire what comes next in some ways. We'll have to see how that comes. But yes I enjoy both military and uniforms so they will be strong themes for me.
10/7/22, 11:37 PM
Excellent follow up, great story, very hot ad quite a big fantasy of mine. Sad about the ending though, but I hope we'll see more of this soon. Hopefully Pete can be somehow rescued, Tim did love him.

10/8/22, 1:06 AM
@Essex Yeah. My only regret in writing this was the ending was meant to be them together. By the time I got there, though, I felt compelled to write the current ending as DeepThrone cleaned up his loose ends. Head-canon where the two are reunited through Liam is fully acceptable until something happens to confirm it. In fact, I'm certain Tim would buy Pete back without knowing why and things would recover from there!
10/8/22, 12:30 AM
Fantastic spoof on the terrible Rangers tropes and twisting them for a wonderfully perfect Halloween sexy story. TBH, I always wished the shows ended up like this. Congratulations on another fantastic hot story.

10/8/22, 1:01 AM
@Essex Thanks once again! Glad you enjoyed it! That said,.... What 'terrible' Rangers tropes!? They're a gold mine! :D But, yeah,... given how often the teams ended up getting mind-controlled or captured, I'm sure they're responsible for a lot of awakened fetishes!
10/6/22, 1:25 AM
A satisfying story. It didn't end like I thought it would. I liked your ending.

10/6/22, 1:42 AM
@Cutlerfan LOL Thank you for that... _carefully crafted_ comment :grin: :wink:

10/7/22, 6:24 PM
@The Dirty Spiders....I fully agree with Cutlerfan. This was NOT the ending I was expecting, but it was satisfying and vague enough to allow a continuance if you desired.

10/8/22, 12:32 AM
@zimdog Hehe. It would need to be a very compelling reason for Benny to ever willingly go through that again...
10/7/22, 10:09 PM
This is an incredible story. I'm enjoying each chapter very much. But I have to say that my sexual enjoyment of it has been muted these last two chapters. I enjoyed the chapters with the hypnosis and overt conditioning much more; that is, after all, why I'm on this site. You're showing sophistication and thoughtfulness in exploring the real life results of the conditioning, and I do appreciate that. This is still one of the best stories I've read in years. The D/s aspects between Liam and Trevor, and now Trevor and Omar, are no doubt sufficient replacement for most of your readers, but I'm afraid they don't have the same punch for me. At this point, I don't really think you'll be able to refocus back on that. The conditioning is pretty much finished; we're seeing the endgame, the results. I just wish you'd spent longer exploring that part.

10/7/22, 11:41 PM
@meatheadosis There is still more to come! It's just I'm a stickler for details and realism, and I know if I were to do every single facet of military brainwashing the story would never end. The next few chapters will be the last of the series, and there will be more brainwashing scenes included.
Zero
10/7/22, 2:43 PM
ooh interesting are we gonna see both brothers fall under the sway of the commander?

10/7/22, 10:23 PM
@Zero One more part to find out
10/7/22, 9:17 PM
Thinking about it, an "Army Soldier" fetish is kind of the perfect intersection of what we've seen in your other stories: the muscles and workout focus of a jockboy, the discipline and urge to please of a (preppy) good boy, and the uniform and team attutude of a soccer player (ok, they all have a toe of discipline, but still).
10/7/22, 9:04 PM
Great story! Keeps you wondering what's next. Really looking forward to reading more of it.
10/7/22, 8:29 PM
Love this series! I keep coming back to reread!
10/7/22, 7:02 PM
I love the story 7 you're a very gifted writer. I will reserve my comments until I get to the most recent chapter.