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10/6/22, 10:09 PM
Loved this chapter! Something is clearly wrong yet it's somewhere out of sight, yet perversely affecting everyone. Women are leaving, jocks are sexually tortured in the sexiest way, and there's a history being teased I wanna know more of. Wonderful chapter and quite hot!. More, please!

10/7/22, 9:41 AM
@Essex Thank you so much for proofreading it. I'm glad you are enjoying it :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
10/7/22, 8:15 AM
Hot damn! It’s not every day that I get to enjoy a takedown of a superhero that I have loved since childhood. Dick Grayson’s fall wasn’t guaranteed, I wanted him to join the pack, I relished every moment so far. Lex Luthor fucking over Amanda Waller for a clone is totally a surprise, not. When Mercy found out that Amanda had tricked her with a hologram, I chuckled. But the last laugh was Mercy’s when she decided to spill that match chamber was locked The moment she arrived in the building. That is, next level gangster planning by Lex, that he won the battle before it was even played. Genius. Game on Donnie’s Pack versus Lex Luthor.
Anonymous
10/7/22, 8:14 AM
Glad to see this continue!
10/6/22, 7:14 PM
Another amazing chapter. Congratulations, you are truly one of the best writers on the net right now

10/7/22, 6:59 AM
@Kyle Cicero thanks man
10/7/22, 5:21 AM
The part of breaking Dick is one of your best writing pieces yet. Can't wait to read more!
10/7/22, 5:10 AM
This has always been an all-time favorite story of mine, and it's hot rereading it every so often. Well done.
10/7/22, 4:38 AM
Maybe my biggest question at the moment is to think what position Scott, Alex's brother, is in this whole story. And what will he do when he realizes that his brother is spiraling into submission for a guy they both think is hot and nothing else. What will Scott do about the spell cast? I also love how dynamic and agile this story is, but without being lacking in hot scenes and character development. It's a great series, even with few chapters. Waiting for full moon.

10/7/22, 4:50 AM
@Sexcrab Scott was interesting, his main roll is to be the outside view to see the changes in Alex. Beyond that I went back and fourth between a few ideas before finally setting on his final version. Chapter 4 see him making a larger roll but you'll have to wait for it to be approved to find out what he does. And thank you I am glad you're enjoying it.
10/6/22, 8:40 PM
How did I miss this story a few months ago? I thank you and so does my dripping cock. You have something in common with @absman420, you both give me a stiffy when I walk through a lawn and garden store.

10/6/22, 9:15 PM
@TexMuscle thanks very much! I hope you continue reading as the story is my favourite I've written so far. Currently working on more from this world, cumming soon!

10/6/22, 10:55 PM
@GoonNoob Just finished chapter two. It's hot as fuck. As I read it I'm imaging the picture of you with some leaves on your cheeks craving a dose of nectar. I got to get somewhere private so I can rub one out.

10/6/22, 11:35 PM
@TexMuscle I really want to get some professional art work down to include in the stories. Glad my work is having the desired effect ;)

10/7/22, 12:26 AM
@GoonNoob Absman420 had some artists draw characters from his last books Pholus Reborn and they would snot up a cock. Butt I'm telling you tape some leafs to that hot ass of yours and fans will give up the nectar. Has to be a pretty big trip to make so many men erupt with pleasure from your thoughts and words. Thank you.
bucke
10/7/22, 12:03 AM
This is amazing. Waiting excitedly for the last two parts. Sad it can't go on forever with the way this is developing.

10/7/22, 12:13 AM
@bucke I'm glad you're enjoying it but you're right, the story has a very hard end with part 5. there isn't a plan or even a good way to continue the story after that point. But I hope the last two parts live up to your expectations
10/6/22, 7:17 PM
Between you and this story and Happy Ending's "A Break From the Monotony", I'm getting lessons on how to do the whole submitting to the commanding officer scene. Honestly, I wanted to be in Alex's position the way you set the scene up. Truly looking forward to the next episode.

10/6/22, 11:58 PM
@New Guy in Town “A Break From the Monotony” is great and I love how realistic and slow its building up. This story is moving much faster and clearly isn't realistic but at the moment Petrekka doesn't know that. he's counting himself very luck and wants them both to have a good time training Alex to be the best he can be. Also being in Petrekka position is a lot of fun.