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Zero
10/7/22, 2:20 PM
ooh any chance we get to see the rest of the batboys fall into the pack? looking forward to what comes next.
10/7/22, 10:52 AM
How pervesely amazing this was. Keep up the excellent work!

10/7/22, 11:47 AM
@Twan AndersenThank you so much! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
10/7/22, 1:37 AM
Nice seeing the universe expand! I may have came while In my chastity while fingering to this... I will say it was a bit hard to follow clearly with it being written more like a script without any dialog tags. Still good story though!

10/7/22, 11:09 AM
@BlondieBoy That's a gratifying image! Appreciate you sharing ;) And sorry for the legibility issues. I'd realized a little too late that they were growing more troublesome with this entry. When I started this series the gimmick was that everything outside of the "filenames" would be audio. When there was only Rich talking for the first few entries, that meant that putting speech marks around everything just looked messy. The only other person to speak in the 'Target Audience' was DeepThrone, so having him speak in italics seemed like an easy fix. It was only towards the end and I'd never planned on continuing the story onwards (see how that went,...) In this chapter, since almost everything is dialogue (rather than lightly patched monologue) each speaker's line blurred together more than I'd hoped they would. Rest assured that the next chapter scales back on this and should be easier to follow for the majority.
10/7/22, 5:29 AM
Your slochangr series probably one of the ones I go back to the most when I need a sure way to get me going, and I'm excited for this to join the rank in a few more chapters' time.

10/7/22, 10:48 AM
@Dishrag you might be excited to know then that in my current productive mood I’ve looked back at that one and might write a continuation
10/6/22, 10:09 PM
Loved this chapter! Something is clearly wrong yet it's somewhere out of sight, yet perversely affecting everyone. Women are leaving, jocks are sexually tortured in the sexiest way, and there's a history being teased I wanna know more of. Wonderful chapter and quite hot!. More, please!

10/7/22, 9:41 AM
@Essex Thank you so much for proofreading it. I'm glad you are enjoying it :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
10/7/22, 8:15 AM
Hot damn! It’s not every day that I get to enjoy a takedown of a superhero that I have loved since childhood. Dick Grayson’s fall wasn’t guaranteed, I wanted him to join the pack, I relished every moment so far. Lex Luthor fucking over Amanda Waller for a clone is totally a surprise, not. When Mercy found out that Amanda had tricked her with a hologram, I chuckled. But the last laugh was Mercy’s when she decided to spill that match chamber was locked The moment she arrived in the building. That is, next level gangster planning by Lex, that he won the battle before it was even played. Genius. Game on Donnie’s Pack versus Lex Luthor.
Anonymous
10/7/22, 8:14 AM
Glad to see this continue!
10/6/22, 7:14 PM
Another amazing chapter. Congratulations, you are truly one of the best writers on the net right now

10/7/22, 6:59 AM
@Kyle Cicero thanks man
10/7/22, 5:21 AM
The part of breaking Dick is one of your best writing pieces yet. Can't wait to read more!
10/7/22, 5:10 AM
This has always been an all-time favorite story of mine, and it's hot rereading it every so often. Well done.