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bucke
10/7/22, 12:03 AM
This is amazing. Waiting excitedly for the last two parts. Sad it can't go on forever with the way this is developing.

10/7/22, 12:13 AM
@bucke I'm glad you're enjoying it but you're right, the story has a very hard end with part 5. there isn't a plan or even a good way to continue the story after that point. But I hope the last two parts live up to your expectations
10/6/22, 7:17 PM
Between you and this story and Happy Ending's "A Break From the Monotony", I'm getting lessons on how to do the whole submitting to the commanding officer scene. Honestly, I wanted to be in Alex's position the way you set the scene up. Truly looking forward to the next episode.

10/6/22, 11:58 PM
@New Guy in Town “A Break From the Monotony” is great and I love how realistic and slow its building up. This story is moving much faster and clearly isn't realistic but at the moment Petrekka doesn't know that. he's counting himself very luck and wants them both to have a good time training Alex to be the best he can be. Also being in Petrekka position is a lot of fun.
Anonymous
10/6/22, 5:36 PM
OMG amazing.

10/6/22, 11:54 PM
@ Thank you
10/6/22, 3:53 AM
Magic, like wishes, can have unforeseen consequences; it is fundamentally speaking your intentions into the universe but the universe isn't as astute in catching the nuances of language. And this fundamentally sets up the events that play out. I'm looking forward to the way things play out.

10/6/22, 11:52 PM
@New Guy in Town I hope you enjoy how they play out because yes, unforeseen consequences can happen very easily if you're to horny to really think about what you're doing.
10/6/22, 3:26 AM
Luke Petrekka is a naturally dominating guy and the spell doesn't specify that the target becomes submissive to the caster. I think we already know what this will lead to, I really want to see it.

10/6/22, 11:51 PM
@Sexcrab Very good points and you're right Petrekka is very used to being in charge. I hope it lives up to your expectation.
PromethiumJPM
10/6/22, 2:38 AM
@Sirjocktrainer, Wow! Awesome opening chapter to this story! My money is on a side wager of brothers. Freshman bro usurps 3rd year college bros apartment. Younger man an adept in Magicks. Older bro will come under Adept Bros powers! Even as 1st year is lusting the Head ROTC cunt, he is well on his way to sex it up! Thinking ROTC’y guy becomes a total slutbottom! Our Hero, 1st year at university, and able and willing to focus his Magick in his brothers apartment. Our blooming Mage desires his brother as the next addition for his figures to capture in his desire to have many, multiple, often and open for men who would like to play in John’s Sex ground!

10/6/22, 11:47 PM
@PromethiumJPM Wow, nice thought out plan. And yes it could very well have been a fun way to have taken the story
10/6/22, 11:10 PM
Can a Qayllar take the ellixar from the boiled roots and free their cocks and orifices? I would like to see a sex crazed Connor transform and challenge the chief.

10/6/22, 11:36 PM
@TexMuscle there is a possibility for Qayllar to be freed from their enslavement, but you'll find that out later ;)
10/6/22, 10:55 PM
more great writing, always excited for next chapter!
Anonymous
10/6/22, 7:58 PM
Somehow ended up missing seeing this drop. Good to see you back, hope to see you back again.
Anonymous
10/6/22, 4:26 PM
Great story! I’ve been a fan of so many of your works on here. Out of curiosity does anyone happen to have an archived version of the story that inspired this one?

10/6/22, 5:32 PM
I'm afraid it was deleted by request of the author. People can have many and complex reasons to need to shelve their work. It's sad that it has to happen, but that's the way it goes sometimes.