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10/5/22, 1:01 PM
Excellent take on the encounter with a more mature twist and dominant confident Kaa, who takes no shit from anyone. Can't wait for the rest! I wonder how it will end, knowing I'll love any outcome.

CampletelyCrazy
10/5/22, 1:14 PM
@Twan Andersen haha, thanks so much for reading! Happy to hear you liked it and I hope you’ll enjoy the potential next chapter too 😈
10/5/22, 11:03 AM
Very interesting. Lots of good set up but a bit of a tease. Can’t wait to see where you take this.

10/5/22, 12:50 PM
@Mrdick Thanks, with luck the rest of it will be posted throughout this week.
10/5/22, 6:06 AM
Ok, this chapter is intriguing! I definetely wanna see the next.

10/5/22, 12:49 PM
@Sexcrab I hope you enjoy the rest, it's all done so it will be posted throughout the week.
10/5/22, 10:59 AM
We need more of this
10/4/22, 5:43 PM
Minor edit needed... Sam became Ben at random for several sentences. Human dose should increase the effects please. Also it's not necessary for a dominant person to be an asshole... but it's easier to write that way I suppose.
10/5/22, 5:51 AM
:point_up_2: Beardfull1 and I are SO on the same wavelength! 🐻 Woof!
10/5/22, 5:31 AM
This chapter is super hot!! Can't wait for Joe to be out in public for the first time but more excited for Sam about his clothes choice and his time trying to explore his exhibitionist side at the gym. Maybe some more triggers or instructions for Sam to make his (mis)adventures kinkier :b ?
10/5/22, 5:02 AM
How can you bookmark this story? Are add to bookmarks and favourite buttons supposed to be on every posting? i eeally would like to know when chapter 5 drops cuz this stuff is hot!
10/5/22, 4:24 AM
Terrific continuation! You're so good at giving us little hints at how the O-force is changing the world, then letting our imaginations do the rest. I hope you don't make us wait too long for the next chapter! (And if you could give us some more scenes of guys staring into hypnotic screens, that would be even better!)
Jake876
10/5/22, 4:07 AM
@Plymouth58 I think it's great you're going down this so called dark path. It's refreshing to see a different line of thought in this realm of super hero writing. I'd suggest a couple things if I could. First, as you add more characters please watch and don't let it become too busy. I've read some good stories where one or two people are concentrated on, their actions, thoughts, interactions and it's very hot. However, once too many are added and it turns into just writing about multiple people having sex, it just gets real boring fast since it loses focus. I like you're adding Kyle's friends, just try to keep focus if you can. Second, I like this mental damage that's happening to Kyle, but there's a part of me that would also like to see a little physical damage done, something permanent like a tattoo someplace that says something like conquered or Tbone revenge. Maybe even as far as Tbone fucking him so hard with a dildo or something he damages his ass by stretching it too far. Or maybe something else. I just think something physically changing might be hot too. That all said, I hope we get.to see his ass used more! Keep up.the great work and hopefully we'll see the next chapter soon!