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10/5/22, 5:02 AM
How can you bookmark this story? Are add to bookmarks and favourite buttons supposed to be on every posting? i eeally would like to know when chapter 5 drops cuz this stuff is hot!
10/5/22, 4:24 AM
Terrific continuation! You're so good at giving us little hints at how the O-force is changing the world, then letting our imaginations do the rest. I hope you don't make us wait too long for the next chapter! (And if you could give us some more scenes of guys staring into hypnotic screens, that would be even better!)
Jake876
10/5/22, 4:07 AM
@Plymouth58 I think it's great you're going down this so called dark path. It's refreshing to see a different line of thought in this realm of super hero writing. I'd suggest a couple things if I could. First, as you add more characters please watch and don't let it become too busy. I've read some good stories where one or two people are concentrated on, their actions, thoughts, interactions and it's very hot. However, once too many are added and it turns into just writing about multiple people having sex, it just gets real boring fast since it loses focus. I like you're adding Kyle's friends, just try to keep focus if you can. Second, I like this mental damage that's happening to Kyle, but there's a part of me that would also like to see a little physical damage done, something permanent like a tattoo someplace that says something like conquered or Tbone revenge. Maybe even as far as Tbone fucking him so hard with a dildo or something he damages his ass by stretching it too far. Or maybe something else. I just think something physically changing might be hot too. That all said, I hope we get.to see his ass used more! Keep up.the great work and hopefully we'll see the next chapter soon!
PromethiumJPM
10/5/22, 3:16 AM
I love the story! 🤤🤤 Yes, subject shift in the writing could make it awkward, but I knew who was who all the way through. Funny, the note of the emergence of the “Asshole gene”. The title mentions Kyle as Mr Leather, so I wasn’t too surprised by the egocentric feels Kyle exhibited, while he might be “suddenly Daddy” he’s still “Daddy’s boy” Kyle. I understand the diametric issue exhibited. It’s almost like mailto:demonicuss666@gmail.com, knows my boy wannabe core while I want to dominate my BOI Daddy!
10/5/22, 2:53 AM
To be honest... At first i wasnt really getting this story at all XD but somehow it got stuck in my mind and i keep thinking about it.. So thats pretty amazing !
10/5/22, 2:31 AM
It was a nice change of pace to read something more lighthearted, though I don't think I would consider Dan getting his asthma attacks back an "improvement."
10/5/22, 2:13 AM
Love this,, happy to see it continue.
10/5/22, 1:24 AM
Another great story from lordandmasterinlondon. Would love a follow-up from it to read about how the stranger abused both of them further and took control of their lives.
10/5/22, 1:16 AM
This is one hell of a story that just kept building. Got my hole twitching and was constantly hard reading it. It was so descriptive that I could imagine the smells so well. Lordandmasterinlondon, you are a fantastic writer and everyone of your stories I have read so far have turned me on! Keep up the good work 👍
10/5/22, 12:26 AM
Even though I'm a part of those who liked this chapter less, I would like to see one as well. However, going over the ending again, it does seem like the story has somewhat ended. We had the big twist in the relationship and we saw that in his final moment of freedom Luke has decided to voluntarily get lost in the pheromones and lose his formerself/"free man" side in favor of being under the mental and physical control of Max. Our main character has lost his agency, so unless he is going to be "awaken" for some reason (like a beta resistance which would be cool), I don't see any continuation, maybe an epilogue.