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PromethiumJPM
10/5/22, 3:16 AM
I love the story! 🤤🤤 Yes, subject shift in the writing could make it awkward, but I knew who was who all the way through. Funny, the note of the emergence of the “Asshole gene”. The title mentions Kyle as Mr Leather, so I wasn’t too surprised by the egocentric feels Kyle exhibited, while he might be “suddenly Daddy” he’s still “Daddy’s boy” Kyle. I understand the diametric issue exhibited. It’s almost like mailto:demonicuss666@gmail.com, knows my boy wannabe core while I want to dominate my BOI Daddy!
10/5/22, 2:53 AM
To be honest... At first i wasnt really getting this story at all XD but somehow it got stuck in my mind and i keep thinking about it.. So thats pretty amazing !
10/5/22, 2:31 AM
It was a nice change of pace to read something more lighthearted, though I don't think I would consider Dan getting his asthma attacks back an "improvement."
10/5/22, 2:13 AM
Love this,, happy to see it continue.
10/5/22, 1:24 AM
Another great story from lordandmasterinlondon. Would love a follow-up from it to read about how the stranger abused both of them further and took control of their lives.
10/5/22, 1:16 AM
This is one hell of a story that just kept building. Got my hole twitching and was constantly hard reading it. It was so descriptive that I could imagine the smells so well. Lordandmasterinlondon, you are a fantastic writer and everyone of your stories I have read so far have turned me on! Keep up the good work 👍
10/5/22, 12:26 AM
Even though I'm a part of those who liked this chapter less, I would like to see one as well. However, going over the ending again, it does seem like the story has somewhat ended. We had the big twist in the relationship and we saw that in his final moment of freedom Luke has decided to voluntarily get lost in the pheromones and lose his formerself/"free man" side in favor of being under the mental and physical control of Max. Our main character has lost his agency, so unless he is going to be "awaken" for some reason (like a beta resistance which would be cool), I don't see any continuation, maybe an epilogue.
10/4/22, 11:47 PM
I LIVE TO SERVE THE VIRUS
10/4/22, 11:17 PM
Hot! The writing is great and enjoying the transformation of Kyle. Looking forward to seeing where the human dose takes him.
10/4/22, 8:30 PM
The ending 🥺🥺