Recent Comments

10/5/22, 12:26 AM
Even though I'm a part of those who liked this chapter less, I would like to see one as well. However, going over the ending again, it does seem like the story has somewhat ended. We had the big twist in the relationship and we saw that in his final moment of freedom Luke has decided to voluntarily get lost in the pheromones and lose his formerself/"free man" side in favor of being under the mental and physical control of Max. Our main character has lost his agency, so unless he is going to be "awaken" for some reason (like a beta resistance which would be cool), I don't see any continuation, maybe an epilogue.
10/4/22, 11:47 PM
I LIVE TO SERVE THE VIRUS
10/4/22, 11:17 PM
Hot! The writing is great and enjoying the transformation of Kyle. Looking forward to seeing where the human dose takes him.
10/4/22, 8:30 PM
The ending 🥺🥺
Anonymous
10/4/22, 5:49 PM
A story nicely balanced between spooky and sexy.
Anonymous
10/4/22, 5:22 PM
Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
10/4/22, 5:03 PM
Like everyone else, I am really happy that Omar is kept in the loop. I was afraid he was destined to get his heart broken and I'm glad I was wrong (at least as it seems right now). As someone who was in the military and suffered from anxiety disorder, I am both really afraid for Trevor but at the same time hopeful that he will have a better experience than me. One good thing that could be said about a military career is that for those who need structure it can really be a place to shine in.
10/3/22, 1:45 PM
I like that Omar is involved in this and never really forgotten by the narrative. Its a rare and, as far as i can tell, well done depiction of an open relationship. I am curious to see where Trevor ends up. While i don't particularly think he should join the military, there are plenty of positions he could fill, from officer to tech guy. Mostly its just an interesting examination of how exploring kink effects you outside of a scene.

10/4/22, 4:58 PM
@BlindSeer0 I completely agree. At first I was thought he was just an introductory character or a destined to be broken hearted, but gladly I was wrong.
10/4/22, 4:54 PM
Wanting to know more…..